I nearly ** myself laughing at this one: “Check, check, two-two-oh-two. Check, check. Twi’leks have big jugs. Over.”

LOL!! Random. I could just hear some young guy's voice say this, totally serious and deadpan. LOL! I still laugh every time I read it.

Ok, to be serious, I like this little snippet of war-life and B-D's observations about the General seemed very much in character. Well done.

lol...still :)

good little clip on Bao-Dur. I hope you could read my story Joiner King

This was good--I enjoyed it very much. I like Bao-Dur's perspective on the newbies, and their own personal reactions, which made things funnier. Good job.

ah, the joys of newbies... sounds like our freshmen at my HS
minus the blast doors and kick butt General of course