perfect.
i loved it.
it was just perfect.

AMAZIN !
ABSOUTELY AMAZIN !

DOUBLE ROCK ON ALL THE WAY !

this is excellent !
cant wait to read the Tala 1 XD

Update more !

Whe !

JeLlYbEaN RuLz

kool! try and make a other one when you have the time.

Thats so sweet! ^-^ I love your stories! ^-^ lol Johnny didn't get his 'free feel' lol *puts on favs* ^^

Okay, well Johnny was kinda ooc here, but I'm not complaining! It was so sweet!

aww they love each other lol good one-shot write more

;D Hey I'm back! Dun dun dun! lol the new story is really good so far...u must continue!! bye bye
-Crismon

What's wrong with Fridays?
They're always a bludge at school.
No hard work. Teachers don't give you automatic detention if they catch you writing in a notebook at the back of the class... Friday means the weekend is coming. Weekend means more times to update...Lol
Anyway, once again, lovely one-shot. I think I should start writing one shots too, they seem so simple. Maybe you could help me out too on day on msn or through email...you know, just give me a few pointers because you're writing's soo good.
Oh yeah, and if you get a free moment, check out my New fic, Beyblade X Generation Part I, it's an all new adventure/humor fic, and i promise not to be lazy on the updates.
Luv, Stephy!

Hey Dear

Wow, wonderful little one shot, be proud! Me lovsies!

Very moving stuff, really touching how connected Johnny and Aya are, emotional and fulfiling! Well done.

I have to go, but I will email soon dear, hope this cheers you up a little on your dreary Friday. Mine is white, as it's snowing lol

Love SGCred x x x

And another great stpry written by you1 i loved this one shot it was so cute! hope ya right another one! god work and good luck!

inifinites X's and O's

xoxoxooxoxoxoxooxoxoxoxoox

SUgar911^_^

yay it's soo coowl =D are ya happy? xD and now i review =D are ya more happy? XD but i really like it ^^ i love all your storys! TT_TT go you ^^ hope ya come back with a new one-shot soon or continue teh other storys :) or that i see ya online again soon ^^ bye for now!!