...naged to inadvertently stalk you.
You're so mean.
It made me laugh so hard that I don't mind.
People have mocked Mary-Sues like this before, though.

So I'm guessing the end is just around the corner huh. Well, till then I suspose.

Awesome story.. You actually had me laughing hysterically at a couple places - which is hard to do, trust me.

The only nitpick I have.. Is that Mary Sue TOTALLY would be falling in love by the sixth chapter.. Hell, she should have been married and had someones babies by the third. Forget plot developement, I want some smooching and out-of-nowhere romance.

Bloody brilliant, keep going. FAV 4EVR UR SO GEWD!!@!!1
Cheers,
-Mandy

This is by far the dumbest thing I've ever read.
I'd suggest something to fix it... but ouch. This is seriously unfixable.

I LUVZ J00 2 TEEKEE!!1

ZOMG, does Marth have arm insurance? Oh noez, angst...

NUE!!1 TEH BEST STORRIE EVA IZ ENDING!?!

U SHO EVIL!1

*WAH*

-end of the REAL comment-

Zelda is evil

Oh dear god, I love this! My favorite parts were Zelda getting clingy over Mary Sue, Marth lying all bloody over a table for added ANGST! (and Zelda cutting his arm off was priceless. XD), and Link's proposal. And yes, everyone loves cottage cheese. Except me.
"Hi, Fox." "Hi Zelda." *stabs him in the chest with a spoon* "Ow, my ears!" And to this day, we still don't know why. Favorite quote from the chapter.

ZOMG PLEEZ TELL ME WHERE U GOT DAT FOX AS BIG AS A BUILDING WITH LAZER BEM EYEZ1!!1!1!!

*goes to recharge the sun and her alkaline batteries*

Lol, angst.

Lol, some... uh... lol.

Lol, lol.

NUUE JOO CUT MARTH'S ARM OFF!1

And Fox's poor ears...

NUU FOCKSH HOW CULD U DO THAT TO HIM U MUST HAET HIM!1 I HAET JOO!

GUDD CHAPTER THO UPDAET!

Awsome story. Very Funny. Hope to read more soon.

Lol one of the most hilarious stories i ever read. My favorite would be the whole Falco and Samus thing.

Falco and Samus whipped their guns out, pointed directly at each other’s heads. “Woah-a,” said Mario, “it-a was only a suggestion.”“I did not,” hissed Samus at Falco, “cheat.”“Oh, so hitting me in the face while we’re arm-wrestling doesn’t count as cheating, then?” hissed Falco back.“That was not me,” replied Samus evenly, “that was Luigi.”“Oh?” said Falco, swinging his gun around to point it at Mario.“I’m-a Mario,” said Mario quickly.

That was... Awesome!
I've read parody before but that! That just left them all behind! ^.^
-Reedhare, Leader of the Save the Chocolate Bunnies Act

O mi gawd i luv teh mary suez!!1

j00 teh pwns!1

Faved. Yay.

Wow, how wowish?

Yay!

Mary Sue is awesome...MarthxMarySue is my favorite pairing...YAI!!1!

*steals diamonds* MUAHAHA.