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i luv gaara1997
2009-07-04 . chapter 13
wow i luv ur story and u should be back soon enough so ;P

~xoxo~
tohru-san
i luv gaara1997
2009-07-03 . chapter 11
tohru here i really love ur storys and ur art ur pretty good at making this stuff

~xoxo~
tohru-san
i luv gaara1997
2009-07-03 . chapter 8
ur a very creative person you know, this is a really great story. and i love that red chakra raping around her heart it's the most creative of all of it ;P
JadedGothButterfly
2009-07-03 . chapter 13
One Of My Favorite Stories,To Boot.Everyone's In Character And I Love The Fact How Their Characters Keep Maturing.

Keep It Up & Update Soon! <3
i luv gaara1997
2009-07-02 . chapter 6
wow this story is great and i love that you make the fighting so detailed T.T

'its so beautiful'(sorry i was just copying lee)
Jeff Keunen
2009-06-03 . chapter 13
Pretty good so far.
While the story isn't that original (in my opinion, but then again, I've read just about every decent fic out there), it's more than made up for with how well it's been written.
The way you write is extremely pleasant to read.
The interactions between the characters are believable, and it's nice to see a fic where every single character stays within pre-defined character-sets (Kiba the jealous, Shino the iceman and Naruto the clueless), instead of a fic where Naruto is aware of Hinata 'all of a sudden' without any interaction whatsoever beforehand.
I'll be watching this story, keep it up :)
Paucius
2009-05-07 . chapter 1
anytime now, right ??
K D
2009-05-02 . chapter 11
What a mess of a story. Not liking the vampire character at all. Seems like a filler. I did like the arguing though between Sakura and Hinata.
Smelt
2009-05-02 . chapter 9
Vampires? Jeebus.
Paucius
2009-01-09 . chapter 13
OK, two years by now, it`s been a long wait, so, we should expect a new chapter any time now, right ?
TallyInTheGreen
2009-01-08 . chapter 1
I ** hate you.
Please, know this, remember such, and cut yourself at night.


I WAS SO HAPPY-- reading that,
But, then you crushed my blushing euphoria and
snapped my neck, dead, and spat on me.


Thanks.



But, you are excellent.
I hope the rest is as good as this first chapter.
:]
00Midnight Siren00
2008-09-21 . chapter 4
-does a double take on the LeeSaku- ZOMFG!!?!!??!?!?!?!?! NO! -splodes and falls to the ground then disappears in a puff of smoke-
animeistight
2008-09-14 . chapter 8
i think u should make hinata call Kiba wanwan agiain. keep on writing
animeistight
2008-09-14 . chapter 7
OMG i love this stiory keep on writing and i will love u 4 ever!
shadowstorm13
2008-08-24 . chapter 13
awwnn why must you stop
well at least its close to the end of the hiatus

i cant wait for u to update awesome story :)

ja ne
-shadow
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