Err... It's a bit confusing cause I've already half forgotten about Tactics... But overall its nice...

I think Haruka's and Kantarou's feelings for each other is very very complicated... But I'm a big fan and supporter if they hook up with each other...

They're like complete opposites, sun and moon, light and darkness... But somehow, they have a sort of aura around them that makes it complete... ^.^

I like it, it’s so simple but sweet at the same time... :)

This is really an excellent piece of writing, and I love the wording you used.
You really should build on this; you have the makings for an interesting fic here.
Please continue.

-Elf

nice work!Haruka is nicely potrayed!

Aww, this is lovely. And so sweet. The descriptions are vivid and refreshing. Great job.

=D Nice~ I like the last sentence!

Meow!! I think I'm gonna start reading all your fics... This is another short but great one... It's a.. err... thoughtful fic based on Haruka... Alrite... Go2go to ur next fic... hahhaha

"I still want to cross that line with you. To you."

Hm, with you... and then suddenly saying "to you". That was the only thing that really irked me, however this was pretty good, even though it was written during your Physics class. You must've been bored, huh?