sad sad sad

Expertly done! The start of it, i thought this was going to be another typical random beautiful girl w/special powers meets naruto, fall in love etc

but with the Zabuza story arch it turned into much more. Much deeper, emotional and poignant

The end was shocking in its own subdued wasy.. Yuki 'understood everything.' And the night ended with the characters acting like real adults.

You wrote a very mature story. Great job.

I love it, and i love this pairing too.

keep on typing and ill keep on reading

AW.. sniff that was soo swet..

I was woundering if this was a oneshot but if its not then its a great startand i hope that u follow up on it.

"The flow of time can not be stayed, so we must continue on, looking back to the past with the knowledge that it can not be changed."

Moon-Fur Monk

Uhm... Isn't this a bit early? The C istanteanly? XD

Intresting story. NaruxYuki? update soon.

great!

wow really really nice! it asnt anything i expected! so, it doesent say its a 1shot so will it continue?

too cute..

i like it!