Hello there!
I suppose I could write this in German... but since the fic's in English, too, and it's much more fun, I'll answer that way, as well.

Firstly: Your language is great! Very, very good writing, I couldn't stop reading, just to let you know.
Though, secondly, that's probably because of the content, too. I liked the "love is scary" topic... not that new, but with Angelina and Montague while they are dancing - somehow enchanting. ;) And yeah, I agree that just about everything sounded in character, Montague as the cunning Slytherin, Angelina as the sceptical one... Oh, and I always enjoy Marcus/Katie and Alicia/uhm, someone from Slytherin, really (I kind of reckoned it was Warrington, but you didn't mention any name, did you?), too.

Certainly, there were some beautiful dialogue lines. A bit philosophical... I thought that was really good. But my favourite was, to be honest: "Actually my resolution for today was a complete different one." and the following. I could SO imagine what he was about to say! In a way cute, and I also found it very exciting... for the characters, the plot, just a great twist in the story. =)

And an open end! Cool. So, that makes me quite eager to read the sequel now. Everything in this one-shot - well done.

That was madness man! Cool!

Oh, now it all makes sense.

I guess being a bit confused is what happens when you read part 2 before part 1.

Anyway, great one shot.

Favorite Line:
They could hurt you by ignoring you, kill you with one look, destroy you with one single word. You’re at their mercy. Believe me, it’s not a place any man likes to be.

that was great

Absolutely breath taking.
I love how he tricks her into dancing with him for the third time. Very sly, very cunning. Very Slytherin.
And the waking up talk is such a chat up line. ;)
Wonderful job. You amaze me each time with a new Angelina/Slytherin story.

Kann mich den anderen nur anschließen, großartige Geschichte mal wieder, mit unserem aller Lieblings-Pairing. ;-)
Würde endlich gerne mal wieder mehr von dir lesen, also lass mal mit etwas Neuem nicht zu lange auf dich warten, ja?

I liked it really much can you please write more ;)

Lmao that was very Pride and Prejudice :)
Unusual pairing, a little confusing but essentially very good and funny!! I liked it!

total schön!

und humorvoll - genau das, was ich gerne lese!

super!

WOW! This was great to read.

Their entire discussion on the matter of love, was quite interesting. Especially, seeing how they both reacted to each other's responses.
However, Montague did make a point when he said, in falling in love you're giving up control to the person you're with. There's nothing wrong with that view.
The matter is, that other person is doing the exact same thing, also. Or else love wouldn't be worth taking the risk at all. Not to mention, his confession to Angelina about the way he felt, as well. Made it a whole lot more interesting.

Question is this a one-shot, or are you going to write more? Because it sounds as if there is still a lot unsaid, between Montague and Angelina. Again, I really enjoyed it a lot.

That was really good I liked the pairings they were ur normal expected ones. Is this a one shot? I'd love to read more! Great job!