Nice story I hate then ending.U killed them both wow that hurts.But Awsome story sad sad sad ending.

please continue with the story. it wouldn't be righ for someone else to continue your work.

omg im crying right now,that was soo sad,but so sweet. i loved it so much. this story was so well written. awesome job :,)

...I wanna claim this...but so many other people have asked to claim this..oh well, it's your choice..*sigh* Anyway, good story, but I still can't beleive you killed them..oh well. Someone's bound to fix this right? Just do us a big favor and let someone take this little baby story into their kind and loving care..or else..*thinks* Or else I'll get lessons from Hekele (not you, your story version...which still is you but bear with me...) on how to use sais and go around chasing you with them!! Mwahahahahaha!

can i adopt it i can write another chapter hey, technically kags is still live jsut in ehr time liek int eh past but accordign to the laws of time about 500 years int he future kagoem is fine she jsut ahsnt fallen intot he well ans theyre waitign for this to happen but say inuyashas soul remembers this so he prevents her from goign back for th efinal battle, and he goes back intime ( inkow very confusing but folo me here kay) to give his past self stregnth to defeat naraku nd then he waits 500 years for kagome and when he finds her going intot he well for th elst item and comes out he is all liek kags and she is liek but- u - well- *faints* and hes all liek ** and she's all liek whoa major weird dream and she looks intohis eyes nad screams andis liek oh my **ign gawd and hes liek its me kagie-chan and she is all liek belly butto n (get it cuz inuyasha gets inu as a nick name and then form inu gets innie and an inies is slang for inie bellybutton so we call him belly button i kno bad but hey it works) and he slike ye s and he liek all pulls her to hsi chest and is all like kagie i missed u and hse is liek wha- i jsut saw u a few minute sago and hes all liek im over 500 yrs aold kags i waited watched u grow up all that crap andshe liek oh and he kisses her madly pssionatelyu and they have md passionate sex and have mad passionate love and kids and all the crap

n the end

ha howd u lyk them apples

You killed them! yay, I'm so happy!

This is sad chapter... CLAIMING!

...i'm kinda speachless lol, thats was brilliant and i thoroughly loved it. thanx again for writing it. to say that was the first time you've wrote angst its very good and finally ty again for the story.

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U r evil! i tell u!! evil...

( but it was a good story i have to admit...)
But u killed them! *cry cry*

...dude...u killed them...dude... Ok the story was sweet i really dont care if u killed them off u left it open for someone else to make it happy

(and no i still cant be on the pc but i had to read the fanfic i LOVE ur fanfics i have found no better writer) so yes i am getting on with out my P.O knowing so SH ^.^ ok i have to go. OK I SAID IT ONCE AND I WILL SAY IT AGAIN UR THE BEST WRITER EVER AND THE I WAS A GOOD ONE-SHOT! (and if no one adopts it i will come to ur house and eat ur face!) (i would take it up but i cant be on the pc so...) if u dont know what i am talking about go read my fanfic

OMG OMG OMG someone please adopt this story and make it a happy ending, i would if i wasn't a crappy writer, even though i hated the ending overall it was a good oneshot