Good old competitive Goku and Piccolo. Short but sweet. ^_^b
- Hippy

Yay! It's uploaded! :D
It's cool to see the differences Melinda makes. And the last line was brilliant. It makes you think how little planning the Z Fighters do sometimes.
I only just realised - the Your in the title should be You're :)
- Hippy

Evil homework! ><
It's good, and I like it. Melinda sounds so cool! She was on the verge of being a Mary-Sue, but then she went all scared about Raditz's arrival. ^_^ Raditz is one of the less-recognised characters, so I'm glad he's in here. ^_^

But it also seems a bit rushed and there are some grammetical errors/spelling mistakes and sometimes it switches from past to present tense. (If you want a beta or anything, just say. I've always wanted to beta. ^_^)
- Hippy

PS: Sorry about the extensive use of ^_^. ^_^;

it waz good

Yatayata great story blah blah blah...Kidding! it was good ^_^

Love it update soon ^.^

Love it update soon ^.^

it's interesting so far but it would be even better if it weren'tso mysterious.

It's nice! i like it. But here's a little tip: just to make it funnier, make Kakarrot a little stupider

Goku is a Super Saiyan already right?

I have such an emo name... anyways! I really like the series. It's interesting. Constructive Critisism: Slow down a little. Things are happening very fast. Love it, though! Keep up the great work!

- Your P.E. Buddy... Sarah

Well... That was awkward.

Cool! Update soon! 8D 8D 8D 8D 8D 8D 8D 8D 8D 8D 8D 8D 8D

Good story but u spelt Gohan wrong! :P

Great story so far. Hope you update soon.