It was a beautifully written one-shot... i felt as though i was apart of it

That definatly read like Sesshomaru's sort of logic on things. Well writen.

I really, really do like this one-shot!

It's a sad one, and I do not like the thought of Inupapa dying, but it is such a good piece of work - I think I don't have to mention your pretty style, besides the best part of this here is your description of Sesshoumaru.

For me, his character is very difficult and compliquated, especially when it comes to feelings or his father. You solved this problem very well, you got him just right! Well done!

But I cannot imagine Sesshoumaru killing his father... fighting, yes, of course, but killing...?
Rather not, in my opinion.

"And the most painful goodbyes were those left unsaid."

One of the many sentences I really like on this.

I hope, there will be more one-shots like this!

Bless,
Hrafna

Another great one-shot! What can I say! Greeat! I love it, I love it, I realy love it!

So beautiful and sad. One of those deep storys that brings tears to your eyes. Excellent work.

Sometimes you're a bit hard to follow...

It might be because I can't figure out the chapter divisions, and it also may be that I'm not used to your writing style. It may also be because I'm tired.

Maybe you should make room in your writing for readers like me who are a bit harder to get through to. I experienced the same kind of confusion when reading your original reading. It's all very good and interesting, but I might suggest that you slow down a bit. Linger, explain and describe. Use more names and less pronouns. You have such a great vision you want to express, but I feel that you might zip through it too quickly, maybe as you're trying to get it out of your head and onto paper.

I'll definitely keep reading.

Hi! I'm very impressed with this story. It has such a wonderful *mood* to it. I never thought of Sesshoumaru's reaction to those events... you've got me thinking now about what I'll do with him in my own fic. Thanks!