Reviews for Out of Harm's Way

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Cherry 2008-05-21 ch 49, anon.	abuseAwesome
Cherry 2008-05-21 ch 9, anon.	abuseI think this was my favourite so far.
Cherry 2008-05-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseLoved it
ScooterTV 2008-02-23 ch 45,	abuseK...I just realized that my review didn't really come through as I meant it to. What I said was that these were really great lines! :-) Hope it comes through right this time. "...he can’t hear a thing as he reaches for the gun. The knowledge that there was nothing to hear never once entering his mind." and "Because for that moment the only thing he has to fight the fear that they’ve just buried him again without the glass lid to make sure he would finally die is the hope that he’s been missing ever since he woke up and hit his head."
ScooterTV 2008-01-06 ch 43,	abuseI've read a lot of stories, but this is the first time I've reviewed. I just had to tell you... >>...he can’t hear a thing as he reaches for the gun. The knowledge that there was nothing to hear never once entering his mind.>>... the fear that they’ve just buried him again without the glass lid to make sure he would finally die
Toushiroseyes 2007-07-12 ch 9,	abuseOMG. So cute. I love CSI. Nick and Warrick share a really great friendship and Doug and George really let the characters come to life. Great stories.
wraiths-angel 2007-05-30 ch 49,	abuseYea, its Kinda of Crummy that they never really resolved things after Grave Danger, looking forward to the next chapter, hope the hiatus won't be too long and also looking forward to your next story when it comes out!
snowangel-983 2007-05-30 ch 49,	abusewow, talk about uncomfortable. My poor, Nicky, all messed up inside and totally losty n how to get back to normal, or what passed as normal for him anyway. Can't wait for the next chapter.
snowangel-983 2007-05-26 ch 48,	abuseMy poor Nicky! Man he has to be a very strong person to try and deal with that thng on his own. He needs a big hugs right about now. it really good, can't wait for the next chapter.
twenty3 2007-05-25 ch 48,	abuseAnother great chapter. I liked how much discription you used to cover up for the lack of dialogue. It wasn't even needed. What Nick was feeling and thinking was very well depicted and made clear. I also loved the ending where Warrick showed up. I agree that Grissom wouldn't have really fit, as much as I wish he had. Grissom and Nick should have a better relationship, but they just don't. But Nick and Warrick's friendship makes up for that. I'll never get tired of those two being friends. Congratulations on graduating as well. Keep up the good work =) Looking forward to more
everybetty 2007-05-25 ch 48,	abuseWhile I wholeheartedly agree that Grissom would not, could not have been the choice, based on all you mentioned and then some, I'm not sure I buy the Hodges connection. They are barely cordial with each other on the show. It's funny, but when authors tackle Nick's visit to Kelly, they all have someone take him. I pictured him going by himself, and telling no one, ever, that he went. But I always enjoy reading other (decently written) perspectives. Congratulations on your graduation. I hope that wherever post grad takes you that you have time and room to keep writing! and Good Luck!
Veze 2007-05-25 ch 48, anon.	abuseNice to see you back and congrats !!
wraiths-angel 2007-05-25 ch 48,	abusegreat chapter and loved the ending, is nice that Warrick is alwaysthere or Nick looking forward to the next chapter!
twenty3 2007-04-24 ch 47,	abuseThis is my favorite part of Grave Danger so far. I liked how you didn't have Warrick see Nick right away, so they both had some time to think about everything. And when they finally did talk, you did a very good job. I can just see Nick being afraid of people seeing the bites and everything. The promise fits both characters well and shows how much they care about each other. I'm looking forward to the Kelley Gordon encounter. A before and after would be interesting to see. We didn't get to see how Nick handled seeing her on the show. Or what he was thinking before. Another thing that is still unresolved is what he said on the tape when he was buried, which would also be cool to see your angle on that. Keep up the good work, can't wait for more.
wraiths-angel 2007-04-23 ch 47,	abuseI found some free time so i decided that i would read the chapter and it was really good, looking forward how you handle him with Kelly Gordon and maybe you can have a brief bit ith the rest of the team, looking forward to the next chapter!

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