that was awsome! XD and cute.

Ah! I loved it SO MUCH!

7 hours, and he was only starting to get concerned? Oo

oh my gosh, poor kenshin, i hope he is ok. i love the story so far.

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very nice! for your first "little kenshin" fic was great! it was so sweet! :D

loved it! It's always interesting to read Kenshin/hiko stories like that... Hiko always makes it an interesting read with the way he treats kenshin _ In the end though, it was really sweet with the way he cared for him... great work!

aw, kawaii _ their personalities are so different, it's always fun to see them interacting with one another. and i noticed you used the term 'gi pants'...well the word for them is hakama, if you didn't know . well all in all i'd have to say that it's a good story and i enjoyed reading it lots! _

aww... very cute.

What a sweet story. One of my favoites of the ones of yours that I have read. Nice to see Hiko being caring here. Somehow knowing Kenshin's future as the Battousai makes this particularly poignant.

I love HIko and boy Kenshin stories (Hiko and grwon up Kenshin stories too, for that matter). Boy, Hiko is harsh here. I would have expected him to at least look around once it got dark.

Awe, I thought this was so sweet. Hiko can be a jerk, but I think he really does care about Kenshin. I'm trying to write a little Kenshin story... but it's not going anywere fast .

I liked that you showed a softer side of Hiko, he's pretty cool.

Good job! And to let you know your story has been added to my community! Just a little note: You said Hiko spoon fed Kenshin, I don't think he would have a spoon. Also some of the speaking parts seem awkward such as: "Shaddap" and "Way better" it just seems more of..hmm... what the word? A 'now' way of speaking. But these little things aren't a big deal! I loved the story! It was great! Keep up the good work.

this is kinda good, but what' with "shaddap" ? at least make it "quiet" or "urusai". and Hiko should be more concerned for Kenshin and that Kenshin should be a little more dependant on Hiko, i mean, he is just 9 years old!

I love it! This story is awesome! Hiko is worried when Kenshin doesn't come back, yet he doesn't go and search for him. Kenshin's nightmares...bloody enough that I thought he was seeing a future time (during the Bakumatsu). But it was just him not being strong enough to help in dire situtions. Kenshin was calling for help as he was swept away in the current. And in the state he came back in, Hiko had better have felt guilty! Awesome story!

Hiko sometimes is an idiot, but a good idiot. After all, he's my favorite character.
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