 just another fma fan. 2008-04-02 . chapter 1 Ah. I love Kakashi as well. And this fic is so true in so many ways. *sigh* The poor children of Konoha who will grow up too soon. And the poor adults of Konoha who know how painful it can be if you grow up at all. T.T So touching. ^^ |
 Incognito Temptation 2006-07-31 . chapter 1I agree with the person who said in an earlier review that you portrayed Kakashi as if he were art. Its very beautiful art too, mind you. C=
I especially love what you said about Naruto, since no story I've read could ever describe him so accurately, just the way I picture him to be.
And how you said Sakura would be another person he loses someday. Its probably true...and Kakashi knows this. ^.^
Great job! I look forward to reading other stories by you in the future.
-VanillaBlossom |
 ShikamaruRocks 2006-05-28 . chapter 1You're an excellent writer. Phooey on you for saying you won't write more. :P
I love this oneshot. You perfectly capture my impression of Kakashi. All of these things - I see him thinking them every time I see him on screen. You described all of the characters just as I imagine their minds to work. Wonderful job.
And I'm still putting you on my Author Alert list, plus this story on my Favorite Stories list. So there. |
 Lethal Dose 2006-05-05 . chapter 1First things first, awesome. So far this is the best KakaSaku fic I've had the pleasure of reading. It was light on the possible love they share, and documented the way he wishes to protect who she is. Believe me I've read some of the worst fanfics on KakaSaku...in short they are composed of over dramatic scene where Kakashi is an uke...that's all I'm saying. This was very well written, and I especially loved the way you repeated the line "Kakashi Knows this" it just gave me the chills...good chills. |
 the real esther 2006-03-24 . chapter 1ah, beautifully crafted. loved it. ^_^ |
 Shannon 2006-03-07 . chapter 1 I LOVE THIS! It's so perfect to what Kakashi would think. You had great emotional depth. Please write more! ^_^ |
 Kittycatcharm 2006-03-07 . chapter 1Aw! |
 akashicrecord 2006-03-05 . chapter 1heartbreakingly sad and very good. i like it. |
 ruka-kun 2006-03-05 . chapter 1wow this is beautiful! They way yu managed to describe his feelings are simply an art! |
 Luna de Artemis 2006-03-04 . chapter 1Oh, I love this to no ends!
You portray Kakashi very well.
Your story is captivating, and I never once rushed through it like I usually do to others..well more like one's that bore me to death!
But I love yours very much, and I hope to see more from you soon...you sure have talent for writing about copy nins!
-ciao- |