aww i love their reunion!

I am enjoying this alot! You are very good story teller. Keep it up.

I am loving this...It is really great!

.. i didn't really like twilight, i don't know why, but this
story is really really good , i think it was more more better than twilight, but that is just me. anyway.. I REALLY LIKE IT , GOOD JOB

This is really really good, I am at work reading this when I should be working..LOL

I really loved this first chapter :-D can't wait to read the next ones :) You've done a fantastic job, you should be proud of yourself ! you've gotten the characters right, like they sound and are like in Twilight. I think this will be my favourite story :) keep up the good work :D

nice, thanks for this!

Wow... this story was fantastic! You had me from the first paragraph. And, the last line from Edward pretty much summed up the story for me. Great job!

Wow, just wow! ;D

very very very good story

I think you should have a sequel to this as this whole story amazed I love it soo much and I couldn't believe how addictive it is i stayed up for HOURS to read this I LOVED it so god dam much :D

I just wanted to give you major props on this story, I started reading it today..and i finished it today. I just couldn't stop reading it. You should seriously consider writing a book and getting it published. You're an amazing writer. And I don't think I would have minded if this was how the actual story had panned out. So again, awesome, awesome work!

wow you are a great writer you should write your own books i am sure they would be great

Oh my god! This is so good!

i really wish you would do a fallow up of this story, to see what happened after all of this.
It would be amazing :)
This was an awesome story.
I loved it :]