I wanted to review every chapter but i couldn't stop reading. Your writting is to good. Hope you right more sometime!

i didn't really like the dance part in this one...it's too weird to picture the cullens with costumes on

this chapter made me laugh a lot! it was very funny and intense, i loved it!

im sorry but this story was confusing

i absolutely loved it! can't wait to read more!

I can revview this chapter only i have review whole book so here iit goes this was better than sm she is still my fave u should write more stories and ur storie 2

loved it

wow ur a reaaly gud writer ... with dialoges expressions everything... ur just realy gud :)

I thought you wrote a decent story,except for the spelling. It kept me wanting to read every day. Thanks, keep writing!

It was really exited story. I've read the story in Russian and can say that translation is very good.

I liked this characters, definetely. Your Edward and Bella are really like on Bella and Edward'characters of Stefanie (sorry for some mistakes - I'm Russia and I'm just studing English).

Thank you for the good story!

Nataly is very good translator :)

Dasha.

Slashing his throat? Whaaaa?

Aww, the Bella and Edward moments were so sad.

What's with the blue orb eyes?

I love your fluff! Very cute Halloween costume idea!

LOL. Love the line "...why are you invading Miss Swan's personal space?".

*Especially

Good chapter. I like fluff! I think you're english is very good- I wouldn't think you're ESL.