That was just pure niftiness... its a riddle as old as thought itself, and no matter how many times I read it over the years it only gets better, and this conversation between the two sorceresses is almost comical. I especially love the ending :-)

good one shot, tad on the mobid side but hey it was a very nice story, sorry I havent updated for a while but I've been seriously ill.

Well yeah, everything has a beginning and an ending...you certainly stated that well. (Or maybe no ending at all...) But yeah, I agree with you. I'm certainly curious about the events during and after Time compression, and so that's the direction of my newest story, Eternal Breath. I want to believe that Rinoa has a choice as well...because I just can't take it if she IS Ultimecia...unless she absolutely has no choice whatsoever.

A really great one-shot, Serene. Readers will almost feel as though they are standing in that void with her, questioning what is reality... I must say, a feeling of anxiety certainly danced in my mind as I read through it, and that's really good, I'm hoping you wanted that type of atmosphere. Anyhoo, I liked it alot. Keep up with your muse, your writing is amazing! ^_^

Cheers~

I myself am a fan of the Rinoa Ultimecia theory, in fact I plan on elaborating on that whole theory myself.

I always thought it was a fun school of thought myself, especially since it makes Rinoa more interesting. I thought that she was rather a lame character in the game. So when people like to have fun saying that she becomes Ultimecia somehow I think that's worth reading about.

Work on More Than You Knew only in you want to, sometimes writing a one shot is necessary. I myself really need to get to work on my own story. I haven't even written a word for part Eleven yet. I've just had a lot of crap to deal with.

I'll see ya later.

One word forever repeated: Wow. Wow. Wow. I loved this; every part of it; first to last.