adwkokos 2006-10-28 . chapter 1CLC campain... Yay!
Anyway, awesome story, I love it so much! |
DragonDame57 2006-06-27 . chapter 1ooh.. i love french pastries XP for me, the bouche de noel was actually pretty easy! rolling was fun, and it didn't crumble at all. however, the bread stuck to the baking sheet.. it was difficult getting it off.
good one-shot! i like the patisserie l'amour arc.. |
AngelFyre2195 2006-06-22 . chapter 1I like it! |
Hito me Bore 2006-05-03 . chapter 1I love this story. I hope you update soon! A pastry shop! What a wonderful idea! |
Rae and Arakni 2006-04-24 . chapter 1Arkni: hey, this is neat!! I never would have thought of Leon being a bakery employee!! ...Although I already had the idea of writing a bakery story... But don't worry!! If I do write one, it won't be anything like this!! |
Shadow Cat17 2006-04-24 . chapter 1 Is there going to be a third part!! This is a really cute seires |
Claws 2006-03-17 . chapter 1 Woot! You're continuing it!! [I'm starting to feel hungry with all food talk XD]
Your choice of theme song is good! I've never paid attention to this particular song before, but when I heard it... couldn't help feeling a little choked up after that.
And: Aww, Sora!! You're in the way~! *hauls Sora off so that they could get a little privacy* |
animegirl999 2006-03-14 . chapter 1I liked it. |
HieisBitch 2006-03-05 . chapter 1meh! XD It was a little I dunno what it was really but the smut is missing! I live of it really it keeps meh sane! but anyways you realy like baking or something huh? you give lots of specific detail on the baking bits... and also SORA! Riku has to come into the picture12 he must or Sephy would do to beh with Sora I care little but Sora and Riku are awesome! we must all agree to agree1 Xd sorry sugar gets to you after awhile and it is true if you drink too much coffee you feel sleepy *nods head* like I did a few minutes ago I think I drank 4 cups of coffee I don't recall but good job next time add some smut and i give you my favorite treat in the ginormous world1 toast and Coffee! *gives fell free to give our lovley characters some toast and coffe or milk or whatever you want for I will provide said things so later! |
Aya Kurayami 2006-03-04 . chapter 1Not bad at all!
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Kinda fluffy, but not.. |
Dysfunctional Space Angel 2006-03-04 . chapter 1Yay, Steam is up! I like this one as well. I'd take your challenge, but Emulsion still needs its lemon, so :P Whoot for makeout scenes! X3
Cloud getting jealous of Sora is a nice touch. The relationship is getting deeper as it goes along, which is good. And Leon realizing he doesn't have Cloud's number is priceless, as well as hunting down his apartment.
Your attempt at a Sora is good, and I look forward to the impending RxS. XD |
SeiferAlmasy86 2006-03-04 . chapter 1cute, i love it. keep up the good work |
Bloodyrose666 2006-03-04 . chapter 1Very cute, though Leon never struck me as a pastry person. Very original! |
Jenniyah 2006-03-04 . chapter 1woah, cloud still tips too much... Yeah, this continues... i thought the other was a one shot...h ehe
oh, hope rebirth is updated soon... ... dang, all those delicious bakery goods... yum... now i feel like cake..hehe :P |
Sorceress Fantasia 2006-03-04 . chapter 1Hana-chan! /glomps/ I so love this arc! More Leon and Cloud loving, no? But they didn't make out enough this time! Hopefully they'll be doing a lot more in the next part of this arc!
Anyway, just a random thing... When I got to the part where Cloud noticed the boy outside the bakery, I almost thought it was Sephy! And then it hit me... Boy. Sephy cannot be a boy. And my hopes were dashed. /cries/
More soon pls! I'll be writing the fic we were talking about yesterday soon too! |