Woah... DEEP! Lol! That's some serious scene analysis! I love it. Really complex and considered, and a very interesting approach to their little tiff. It's funny, when you start considering it, the amount of subtext that there is in every moment of MASH. Really nicely done, thanks.

Fabulous and completely believeable...loving Hawk/Trap to death!

I always liked that episode. I kinda wanted to kill Frank myself, but, you know, I tend to feel that way about him. He does serve his purpose though - being an ignorant, swaggering, jealous, annoying berk. Poor Hawk to have to put up with that. ::le sigh:: Crazy how much easier it is to write oneshots than chapters of full-length stories. I should be doing that. Writing chapters. I was hoping to play catch-up this weekend, but I have insane amounts of work for classes. Damn. Well, good luck with your writing! ::huggles::