dear vash the unholy,

i visited 'the sin of existance' page to find that this person is no longer writing anymore in . infact, this person said that has lost interest in ever writing. i happen to like this person's stories and the way this person tells the stories. i don't like reading all the too much descriptive fic that somehow messes my imagination when i'm running the story in my mind while reading the story.

i have added this person in ,my favourite stories and alert and is currently waiting for the next chapter or new story to appear. turns out not. from how i understand, u may have been writing in this fanfiction for a very long time, and to me we are all readers, writers, commentors, and guidance here.

fine if this person's stories is an epic failure..the least u could do is encourage or guide this person to writing a better story next time. i don't know what u wrote to The Sin Of Existance - but all the stories are deleted, thanks to u.

i just started last year and i know myself, i'm not a very food writer. i read alot, i comment reviews here and there.. and i know the people that i have added the stories, the favourites ARE all pretty good writers. i wrote some of my stories directly, no descriptive, glitter, etc..nada.

some stories that i have written are basically just what everyone wants to see in their mind and enjoy. u can find some of my stories in Quizilla - username is 11OneDone2Many.

u can also read my stories and poems here in . i'm not that well-known in fanfiction but at least the readers here enjoy my stories. i even have help from a friend, here in fanfic. i won't be using her username as i don not want her to be pulled into this scenario.

u read the sin of existance stories and says "it's an epic failure". i want u to read mine in Quizilla and in . if my stories are as bad and worse as the sin of existance - u tell me. i don't really care what u say to me bout my stories because in the ned of the day, it's mine not yours, i'm writing it, u're reading them. u don't like it..leave a msg. i don't bloody well care if u cristicise my stories or curse me...in the end of the day, u don't know me but my username.

thank q..oh, and i don't like ur stories!

wtf? you had me going until he goes and rapes and innocent woman for no reason...who is this guy pretending to be harry potter??
and i'm pretty sure that it's appropriate to put a warning at the beginning of the chap for that kind of thing. sex is one thing, rape is another, if you think they are the same then maybe you would benefit from some time spent in a US prison...

nice chapter good going

good start keep up the good work

Your stories are rather sadistic, but at certian parts their kind of funny. Weird. Great story.

So cute.

Fun

Not a bad chapter, I like a Dark Harry story, and I hope to see another update SOON...

Not a bad chapter, I like that Harry is now going by Hadrian Mores, that should help a lot...

What a great start to the story, I wonder what is behind this door that Voldy wants to get ing...

Bwahahaha! How beautifully twisted!
Love it so far (sounds sadistic doesn't it?), love how bastard-ly he has become.

I like how you used Fenrir, and that he had a relative on the "wrong side".

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good sttory so far, update soon!

keep up the good owrk

I was wondering when you're going to update.

What a lovely story, I say. You should definitely continue. I'm just wondering if you keep turning Harry darker or if he will find a balance.