I am in shock...the idea for this fiction is fantastic!! It's beautiful and so easy to understand and connect with. Their thoughts have been set so originally and planned out so perfectly.

If you get around to finishing it I would be so grateful!

thankyou

I adore this story and just now found it again.
I notice, of course, that you haven't written anything for this story for quite a long period of time.
As useless as it may be, I'm pleading with you to continue this story. It really is intruiging and well written and it would be a heartbreaking waste to let it die.
if you'd like me to edit for you, please send anything to

I left a comment at LJ, but in case you don't get reply notifications, I thought I should post here, too.

I admit, the smut caught my eye--but what moved me to comment is your finesse with the characters. You give them a depth and clarity I rarely encounter in fanfic (and I've read plenty--just not in this fandom).

It's somewhat discouraging that you haven't updated since 2006, but I'm an optimist and will check every now and then for future chapters.

Are you going to finish this story?

are you gonna finish this?please let me know if you are...

That is just ... amazing. I've looked at the update date and I know it has been a while .. but you can't just leave it like that! (which is very hypocritical for me to say but never mind.) Thanks.

Are you gonna finish this story? It`s really good.

wow!this was a awesome story and you have not updated in months.you should be ashamed for making you readers wait people have been patiently waiting and you go and work on other stories. if my uilt trip worked e-mail me when you update!

(( email not real)) i have waited what? 1 /YEAR/ for u to finally post a new chapter in Collateral! i have reread it a billion times cus its such a good story! its well written, has a fantastic plot and i lurve the characters, but why dont u continue the story?! wait are u...dead...or something cus its creepy that im reviewing for a dead person's story...(shudders) kk never mind deadish person dont um get..angry and come after me! ...please?...

Nice! Am I too bad for wishing Tohma to be right? :) Oh well, the whole plot is very interesting, I love how you portray Yuki's confusion and Tohma's control-freakish madness. And I can't wait to read the next chapter, even if the looming presence of an OC at the end of Chapter 5 worries me a little. :D So please update. Update as fast as you can and I will be yours forever. Well, sort of...

This fic is really well written and I love the darkness of it. I hope that Tohma loses and gets what is comming to him. In Spades.

great story overall...love the ideas and detail...can not wait for the next chapter..

Nikolai!
Oh, I like the name..!
Please, post mnore soon! It's so bad that I jsut had time now to read this story! Tohma is insane, well, maybe not.. but still.
I loved it.
And would love to see more of Nikolai
GaB

Wonderful. I'm utterly intrigued by this story. I must admit, I have very little love for Tohma, and the way you're painting him makes me have even less. He's a manipulative little bastard that would benefit greatly by being knocked down a few pegs. I'm looking forward to reading how Yuki handles this situation.

~Kai

I'd give you thumbs up, if you could only see my thumbs. ^^
Off To Read This Again,