Baylock said once he'd prefer to be shot if he ever became infected rather than be controlled by the aliens. Linda doubtless would have preferred to die of old age, but she knew dying young was better than being used by the aliens. Good story. Sad, but good.

So many infectees dead. Hmmm, just how contagious is encephalitis? Could Linda be the cause?

I liked Linda's reaction to Cavennaugh and his men.

I like the story but no Blaylock would use last names

SHE DIED? You should have made this longer, because I really like Linda... Poor lady...

Pretty good.

But sad...

I like the concepts in this story and all, and you're writing... But I have to nitpick again, I'm sorry... The alien infection isn't a virus, its a mutation. There's a big huge difference.

Anyways, pretty cool chappie. Love Ramsey's line, so the big bad aliens are heading for the medlab?

Nothing good could come of this! :D

FUN! lol

Hey, nice story. I'm intrigued by the plot you've come up with- I'll definitely be waiting for more!

Very promisinng. Stay with it.

Pretty cool, I really enjoyed this. :D

Are you going to continue? hm? :D

Only nit-pick I have is you use " those for quotes, not '.

That's the only thing I saw.

I wanna read more!