   Stormjade 8/16/11 . chapter 1Awww, so adorable! Great idea...just one comment...I though Ryoga's voice wasn't that deep. Not that it really matters. |
| Pchan Uchan RYOga and UkYO 9/10/10 . chapter 1 i love it! wish the story was longer though |
| newbie 9/4/10 . chapter 1 love it! and love the pair! |
| UchanPchanforeverlove 8/31/10 . chapter 1 i love all of you fanfic of ryoga and ukyo |
| 1234w 1/27/10 . chapter 1 wow, I LOVE THIS! I REALLY LOVE UKYO AND RYOGA STORY!
MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE!
SO, NOW THAT YOU'VE HEARD ME LOUD AND CLEAR, I SAID!
MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE! MAKE MORE!
UNDERSTOOD?GOOD! |
| LadyKatherine29 4/3/07 . chapter 1 Loved it. Ryoga/Ukyo is one of my favorte parings. A very nice look into what should have been for those two. I really enjoyed how you slowly built things up and then wrapped it all up at the end. |
| Justanotherwannabeaurthor 2/28/07 . chapter 1 I only have one word for this...
"Aw!"
This was so sweet. I loved it. _ Keep up the good work. |
| RoninAlchemist25 1/27/07 . chapter 1 Really good story! for some reason, that paragraph about Ukyo's present from Ryoga reminded me of Naruto...maybe the foxes and the name Inari. Is Inari really the god of rice? |
| SithKnight-Galen 7/16/06 . chapter 1 While I know that this is only a oneshot, this also could be a great lead in for it's own series, if you ever considered re-visiting it. I found this to be very touching, while leaving alot to the imagination. |
| katanbuilder3 6/29/06 . chapter 1 Pretty good! |
| justsukiya 6/11/06 . chapter 1 aww man that is sweet
the gift in the end is very touching
i can see the whole story in my head
great job |
| raven-999 3/16/06 . chapter 1 aww! i love it...ryouga finally has someone who notices him! |
| Sweatshirt Shiro 3/15/06 . chapter 1 Fantastic and Romantic! |
| Anna Marie Raven 3/10/06 . chapter 1 This was really cute. I liked it a lot. But, in all honesty, the tense you wrote in was kind of bugging me. There was something wrong with the fluidity, making it read more like a play-by-play account of somthing as it's happening, rather than a smoothly recalled story.
Other than that, though, I enjoyed it, and you ought to keep up the good work! |
| Miako6 3/5/06 . chapter 1 i just wanted to cry for Rouga! WHY DO THEY ALWAYS BLAME HIM? may be that's whay i LOVE him...
Miako6 |
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