so FREAKY FRIDAY!

its a good sory, but it could have been better. you didnt develop the plot as much as it could/should have been. but on a diff note, this gave me an idea. im writting a story based off this one, but i'll give you credit for writting the origonal. _

I LOVE THIS STORY! It's so depressing... it's good!

Actually, it was okay. Good, in all honesty. I thought the ending was very truthful. Poor Ron...I wonder if he'll get over it. I'm sure he will in time, but...it will be painful and a long process.

rushed...poor Ron...I LOV U RON!

so sad

Kewl

THAT SUCKS !this is a flame

that was horrible...not badly-written horrible, but the way you just killed Hermione & Harry like that...darn you! and anyway, Ron & Hermione belong together.

I'm sorry but this is just too cruel. How could you do this to us? Well, anyway, I was so sure it was going to end by Ron killing himself, but it didn't, so, um, I don't know what my point is! AAaaagh, I need food.

Hmmm...very interesting. By the way, good job keeping Ron in character. That's exactly how he is. Unrational and sometimes selfish. I'm sure he would be angry at Harry for dying without him, LOL!

Sad. You need to work on your grammar.

that was really sad jen

Ouch. Other than that, no comment.

so sad and very emotional you should write a sequal