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Lilith0376
2009-08-10 . chapter 13
Very interesting and sad chapter I feel so bad for Tsutomu. I also feel sorry for Diane's parents, she gives them a big headache not to mention embarrasment.
Nofretete
2009-04-22 . chapter 12
very sad... but I liked it! Please write more soon!
Lilith0376
2009-02-21 . chapter 10
This chapter is very funny. I love the interaction between the brothers and the two girls.
Lilith0376
2009-02-21 . chapter 11
I was very surprised by the turn of events. Tsutomu is a very interesting character and I would have never guess he had cancer. As always you did a great job.
MaryJay13
2009-02-05 . chapter 11
Wow! You are perfectly right: I am VERY impressed! What else can I say? LOVED it! :-) Can't wait to read the next chapter :-)
Nofretete
2009-01-26 . chapter 9
It's nice to get to know Kari better in this chapter. And don't worry about the dialogues. Sometimes (like in this chapter) it helps a lot to understand the characters better.
MaryJay13
2009-01-18 . chapter 9
I wouldn't be so hard about your chapter, if I were you :-) I actually quite enjoyed it! Sometimes, dialogues are welcomed, it gives another perspective on characters and their relationships towards one another. I particularly liked Meg's pinning her brothers in this :-)

So, again, a very good chapter!
Nofretete
2009-01-16 . chapter 8
Once again a very good chapter. It's exciting to see how the story developed. I hope to read more soon!
MaryJay13
2009-01-06 . chapter 7
Sorry for not having posted a review sooner. Your story is really excellent! I was so thrilled when I saw a new chapter online. I can't wait to read chapter 8!
Nofretete
2008-08-18 . chapter 6
I am really excited to see what the big secret about their mother is. I hope Bunji and Kari get along better from now on. Thank you so much for posting that chapter and hopefully you will write more!
Nofretete
2008-07-10 . chapter 5
I am so happy that you updated. I really love the new chapter. Specially the way you show Hikari's character and her feeling for Bunji. Can't wait to see what will happen next. Please continue!
g2fan
2008-07-09 . chapter 5
Yeah an update! Good chapter. More soon please. Wendy
Shana Elmsford
2007-08-02 . chapter 4
new chapters! i love them. please Do more.



ps. 5 stars * ^_^
g2fan
2007-06-15 . chapter 4
Very good chapter. I'm glad you were able to update. Please continue. Wendy
g2fan
2007-04-24 . chapter 3
Good story. Please update again soon Wendy
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