|Reviews for Primal|
| Kurama's Foxy Rose 2/2/10 . chapter 1
What was the point of editing out the most direct part of the lemon? It wasn't that much different than the rest.
| Deritine 2/15/09 . chapter 1
I love this story! A very interesting idea. I see you haven't updated it for a while... perhaps you will gain some inspiration when the HP one is done, no? You left it at such a pivotal point. I'm twitching wondering whether she's going to end up with Sesshoumaru or what- plus all the other things you left open... like OMGZ preggers!
But once again you do well making the story not drive toward one pairing that I'm favoring, which I think both makes it a more interesting romance-type read, plus lets all kinds of interesting things happen with the plot.
Though I do have to say... was a bit annoying the extent of the metaphors that were going on. Either skip over the details of the sex bit or really describe it, I think. The 'dew on the petals' thing had me half disgusted and half laughing hysterically. I mean, honestly- flower analogies have no place in S&M sex between two blood crazed demons. Either way would work- I think the plot points that needed to happen with the sex were described fine without going into the details. But details are fun, no? Probably now you're better at writing it, anyway- been a few years, ne?
| YYonder 1/11/09 . chapter 4
is it done?
| Sesshylover4eva 12/24/08 . chapter 4
| sexy midnight miko 4/18/08 . chapter 4
i love this story please update
| Band Geek Chick 2/14/08 . chapter 1
please finish awsome story
| Sasha Franco 12/20/07 . chapter 4
so wonderful, please continue!
| blackwolf15 3/29/07 . chapter 1
i like it its kind of odd but its cool ill read the rest l8r
| Ro0tin4Kagome 1/31/07 . chapter 4
yay the real kagomes bak..in a way..u need to update this!
| Samantha-Shelby 1/2/07 . chapter 1
Will you update please? You kind of left of at a small cliffhanger.
| hot hanyou luver 12/16/06 . chapter 1
I know im prolly da only one whoo thinks like this but i would have liked to read the thing you edited out
| LeSinner 11/26/06 . chapter 4
It's different... well, not completely, but I would like to see this through the end...
| Person Of A Strange Origin 11/2/06 . chapter 4
OH Interesting. Hurry up and update please,
Person Of A Strange Origin or POASO
| Darkness living in Hope 10/30/06 . chapter 4
that was such a very good chapter. i was really happy that you update. and the story so far is completely awesome. cant wait for chapter 5
Darkness living in Hope
| SaBrIeL ofthe MoOn 10/29/06 . chapter 4
This was an AWESOME chapter! Please update soon! Best of Luck!