What was the point of editing out the most direct part of the lemon? It wasn't that much different than the rest.

I love this story! A very interesting idea. I see you haven't updated it for a while... perhaps you will gain some inspiration when the HP one is done, no? You left it at such a pivotal point. I'm twitching wondering whether she's going to end up with Sesshoumaru or what- plus all the other things you left open... like OMGZ preggers!

Hah.

But once again you do well making the story not drive toward one pairing that I'm favoring, which I think both makes it a more interesting romance-type read, plus lets all kinds of interesting things happen with the plot.

Though I do have to say... was a bit annoying the extent of the metaphors that were going on. Either skip over the details of the sex bit or really describe it, I think. The 'dew on the petals' thing had me half disgusted and half laughing hysterically. I mean, honestly- flower analogies have no place in S&M sex between two blood crazed demons. Either way would work- I think the plot points that needed to happen with the sex were described fine without going into the details. But details are fun, no? Probably now you're better at writing it, anyway- been a few years, ne?

is it done?

please finish

i love this story please update

please finish awsome story

so wonderful, please continue!

i like it its kind of odd but its cool ill read the rest l8r

yay the real kagomes bak..in a way..u need to update this!

asap!

r4k

Will you update please? You kind of left of at a small cliffhanger.

I know im prolly da only one whoo thinks like this but i would have liked to read the thing you edited out

O.o

It's different... well, not completely, but I would like to see this through the end...

OH Interesting. Hurry up and update please,

Person Of A Strange Origin or POASO

that was such a very good chapter. i was really happy that you update. and the story so far is completely awesome. cant wait for chapter 5

Darkness living in Hope

This was an AWESOME chapter! Please update soon! Best of Luck!