Nice piece of fantasy, interesting plotline and well-written. I thought there was a bit of OOCness, though, especially with Jesse.

Interesting. I do hope to see some rocketshipping later on in the story, for I surely will not be able to enjoy this piece if there is none!

AWESOME!

although I wasn't able to finish reading, it looks really good and well written.

This story is one of my favourite Pokemon stories, and I am glad to have found you again on fanfiction.net! I love your writing style, you should try and write original stories - you could probably get them published.

great story , but please hurry and post the next chapter 'cause I'm dieing to know what happens!

THIS IS A GREAT STORY!KEEP ON WRITING!PPPPPLLLLLEEEEAAAASSSSEE!

Erm i dont know wot iz like coz i didnt read it i mean that would wast my time.

Christ! I was wondering what happened to you! I finally got off my lazy butt and actually tried looking for you, so I guess it paid off. I want to see how the story goes since I last left off, but I need some sleep.

Heya! Back again...well I just wnted ta revieve this for ya, although i've read the first chapter a long time ago...BEST STORY IN THE WORLD...ya know, I sometimes think they should make a movie out of it...Now THAT WOULD BE...WOW...

Great series

I WILL BE BREIF. IT WAS VERY GOOD.

Holy Crap! This is looking good!

Well, one down, six to go. Gonna definitely read the rest of what you've written soon!1

Oooooh cliffhanger! _