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| Reviews for The Price of Love |
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   joebthegreat 5/28/06 . chapter 7ok... You need to make more paragraphs and stop just making one huge dense square of text. It's a rule of grammar that you have to make a new paragraph every time someone speaks. There are few exceptions to this rule, and they arn't in this story. This is still a great story. I just wanted to say something worthwhile for once. |
| joebthegreat 5/24/06 . chapter 6 good... good... wonderfully greatly amazingly good... this deserves more reviews... but it seems everyone's lost interest in this game... yeah... in ANY other genre you would have likely gotten at least 20-30 reviews by now... |
| joebthegreat 5/22/06 . chapter 5 nice and fast... I notice you dont accept anonnymous reviews... I was gonna sign it anyway but yeah... I still noticed that... love the suspence. The two huge paragraphs at the end kind of annoyed me but it wasn't anything that would ruin a great story like this. |
| joebthegreat 5/19/06 . chapter 4 dang... two chapters up EXTREMELY fast... good job on them too. |
| joebthegreat 5/16/06 . chapter 2 so what's the price of love then? is it $7.50? anyway, that was a cool little beginning, and I seem to be the only one interested in any of these fanfiction stories so... keep writing... do it for ME man! |
