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Vampirycent 2006-04-22 . chapter 1
Twas cute ^_^ However, the second sentence I felt there was a slight oversuee of the word 'slightly'.

"His hair, currently down, waved slightly as he walked. Slightly damp, it glistened slightly in the overhead lights."

Don't you agree? ^_~ Anywho, until next time, TC. Peace.

~Angel~
Melipapaya 2006-04-17 . chapter 1
LOL I love it very cute especially the way you made kai!
Razorblade Girl 2006-03-17 . chapter 1
loved it...so cute...^_X
FireballAmi 2006-03-13 . chapter 1
Pretty good. Though some spelling errors, not bad. But for some reason I feel like it's missing something or could have been better. Oh well, all-in-all not a bad story.
Yazzy 2006-03-09 . chapter 1
Hair XD

An unusual idea for a fic, I like it, for all I never venture into the land of TyKa.

Yazzy
NekoAnime 2006-03-05 . chapter 1
Aw, that was so cute. I never would have been able to guess either. I also think that I would have gotten irritated with someone sitting and smelling my hair for 20 minutes. Not that it wouldn't have been flattering at first. ^_^ You're so good at cute little fluffy one-shots. Write more soon.
TechnoRanma 2006-03-05 . chapter 1
THIS IS SO SWEET & SPICY! Muwaha I love you fics. I always love how you write Kai for some reason, you just seem to get him dead-on, and Tyson is of course a buncha fun in your fics. I loved it!
FirieGurl 2006-03-05 . chapter 1
aw that was cute
NKingy 2006-03-05 . chapter 1
lol! nothing like herbal essences :P
Elektra107 2006-03-04 . chapter 1
Aw...that was cute! I loved it! Great Job!
Ashla 2006-03-04 . chapter 1
Best way to get either of them to shut up, heehee. Another cute piece! :D I love your one-shots! You have so many ideas, and they're all good! ^^ (-nods-) Can't wait for more!
Slán slán!
~Ashla~
KillerMiget 2006-03-04 . chapter 1
hehehe, that was really good, i can just picture tysons hair being slightly curly lol
Liah-chan 2006-03-04 . chapter 1
Aw cute and fluffy and fun ^_^ loved it ^^ *glomps you*

Liah xx
Eye-dentity Cry-sis 2006-03-04 . chapter 1
lol, that was cute ^^, i liked it ^^ keep up the good work ^^
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