Vampirycent 2006-04-22 . chapter 1Twas cute ^_^ However, the second sentence I felt there was a slight oversuee of the word 'slightly'.
"His hair, currently down, waved slightly as he walked. Slightly damp, it glistened slightly in the overhead lights."
Don't you agree? ^_~ Anywho, until next time, TC. Peace.
~Angel~ |
Melipapaya 2006-04-17 . chapter 1LOL I love it very cute especially the way you made kai! |
Razorblade Girl 2006-03-17 . chapter 1loved it...so cute...^_X |
FireballAmi 2006-03-13 . chapter 1Pretty good. Though some spelling errors, not bad. But for some reason I feel like it's missing something or could have been better. Oh well, all-in-all not a bad story. |
Yazzy 2006-03-09 . chapter 1Hair XD
An unusual idea for a fic, I like it, for all I never venture into the land of TyKa.
Yazzy |
NekoAnime 2006-03-05 . chapter 1Aw, that was so cute. I never would have been able to guess either. I also think that I would have gotten irritated with someone sitting and smelling my hair for 20 minutes. Not that it wouldn't have been flattering at first. ^_^ You're so good at cute little fluffy one-shots. Write more soon. |
TechnoRanma 2006-03-05 . chapter 1THIS IS SO SWEET & SPICY! Muwaha I love you fics. I always love how you write Kai for some reason, you just seem to get him dead-on, and Tyson is of course a buncha fun in your fics. I loved it! |
FirieGurl 2006-03-05 . chapter 1aw that was cute |
NKingy 2006-03-05 . chapter 1lol! nothing like herbal essences :P |
Elektra107 2006-03-04 . chapter 1Aw...that was cute! I loved it! Great Job! |
Ashla 2006-03-04 . chapter 1Best way to get either of them to shut up, heehee. Another cute piece! :D I love your one-shots! You have so many ideas, and they're all good! ^^ (-nods-) Can't wait for more!
Slán slán!
~Ashla~ |
KillerMiget 2006-03-04 . chapter 1hehehe, that was really good, i can just picture tysons hair being slightly curly lol |
Liah-chan 2006-03-04 . chapter 1Aw cute and fluffy and fun ^_^ loved it ^^ *glomps you*
Liah xx |
Eye-dentity Cry-sis 2006-03-04 . chapter 1lol, that was cute ^^, i liked it ^^ keep up the good work ^^ |