I have seen the reviews a certain person has left behind for you and I disagree wholeheartedly. This story was quite good. As far I know some doctors do ask you to count down from ten when administering anesthetics.

Please ignore the trolls. While this story is not perfect, it's not rubbish either.

i know i haven't reviewed in a while, but i was finishing school and getting ready for my big vacation...

what a great birthday present, this last chapter! (yes, the last post was indeedly on my birthday! SIXTEEN, WOOT! ok, i'll shut up now) anyway, disregaurding flames is the way to go. constructive criticism should always be reguarded (if not utilized), but flames should taken out and shot. but that's just my oh-so-educated opinion. nobody listens to teenagers anyway.

i'm glad Charlie got over the trauma. it would've been sad if his domain (the garage) was closed off to him FOREVER!

great job on the story :)

hey that was a realy good storie i liked it a whole lot.

Hi,

What part was revised. No flames great story so far, but I'm not done reading it as of yet. Will get back to you when I'm done. I'm not in this chapter I'm farther ahead, I just took the opportunity to drop a line at this chapter.

Thank You

YAY! Loved the story, great work!

Very sweet. I like how you don't completely resolve all the issues. The pacing of Charlie's re-entrance into the garage felt a little too fast, but then again, Charlie is a 100 percent or nothing type of character.

Looking forward to your next story!

Yay! Another happy ending to another happy (well, not really) story! I'm so glad! I can't wait for the end of "A Million" and the stories you write after that. You're one of my favorite Charlieangst writers, you know.

Authoressinhiding :)

can't believe it's really over!:( i really enjoyed this story, and LOVED the ending; it was nice to see that though charlie feared going into the garage, etc, he wasn't rediculous about it, and was able to begin healing in the end:) well written, and well executed, this fic was a fun read:):) keep on writting!:):)

Okay, I'm reviewing again for two reasons. One, I liked this chapter also. Two, I realized after writing that review the way it sounded. I don't think British people are drunks. That idea was kind of based on Rodney Skinner from LXG. He's a good character. Hope I didn't offend anyone except mouse. Yeah, Cliffies, this is still very good story.

Great ending! I'm glad you brought everybody through this in good health, physically, mentally and emotionally!

I was reading the beginning of this chapter and was surprised that someone had flamed it. There are some parts of this story that could use a little (A little bit more length of the dialouge in this chapter is one thing I could think), but I personally enjoy this story. I went back and read the flames that mouse person wrote and I had to laugh. I could just imagine them with a British accent sitting at the computer drunk, but then again I had an overactive imagination. I think your medical facts sound very realistic. (They told me to count back from ten during my surgeries.) I don't, maybe it's just because I'm author who makes up a lot of her medical problems for story. Anyway, good story. Keep up the good work.

I've been following your story since its inception and I have to say I enjoyed it. I was rather dismayed to read the reviews from the rodent (mouse). The purpose reviewing is not only to offer support and constructive criticism, but it gives the reader the opportunity to ask questions of the authour.

I'm generally the world's worst reviewer in the way that I don't do it as often as I should. I write in another fandom and have found that generally the reviews are much more constructive. Don't let the rodent get you down. He/she doesn't even have the balls to log in and give you a chance to respond to their *concerns* (hack, cough, sneeze... sorry, hair ball...I think it was a mouse... ;o) )

Anyway, I'm thrilled that you finished this and yeah there were a couple of minor mistakes, but that's all they were... MINOR. They in no way detracted from your story and I really want to read more from you. It's wonderful being able to read new (young) writers and be able to see their writings become stronger.

Don't let the ** get you down.

And remember, even though I don't review as much as I should, I'm reading. I have an aresenal of stale Tim-bits ready and waiting to fling at you if you don't keep writing.

Newfoundland isn't *that* big.

Okay, well it is, but being from "Centre of the Universe" (Ontario)I am all powerful (snerk).

Ontarians got all the ego while those of you from "The Rock" got all the common sense.

Keep writing babycakes...

You did a wonderful job with this story and should be very proud. I hope with your writing abilities that you will do another one.
I am so sorry to see this one end as I have really enjoyed it. I was happy to see a chapter 11 because when it said complete for Chapter 10 I thought it was abit abrupt of an ending. But you came back and added the final chapter., all is good, all is well! Again congratulations on completing one great story!!

Nice work.

Good story! Thanks for posting and for finishing it!