Sorry, but... I can't really understand what this fic is about. Did Parm die or something like that?

are u gonna continue or what? :-(

Quite interesting. I feel very unclear concerning the situation you established, but I feel surprisingly fond of your portrayal of future!Kitt and Artha's actions. Very well written, I think. I like it. :)

You know I love it (thanks for the title credit) :)

I like it. Interetsing use of the canon/quasi sue, and nice description. I'm not sure if you helped her sueishness, but you certainly didn't make the matter any worse :P and I have the coolest mental images in my head now ^_^

Enjoyable. Thanks for sharing :)