That was amazing. There was just the right hint of suggestion- nothing too blatant. There's too many blatant things these days. Suggestive, not flamboyant.

Very good!! I have just recently read a lot of Grimm's Fairy Tales and was surprised at them- at how different they were than how i thought they'd be. They are so much darker and, well, bloodier than the Disney versions.

But I really really really like this!! Hooray!

Prongs

Woah, interesting concept!

So that they can financially support their “protégés.”
Oh!

"I understand that he’s here because of Grandmama’s money, and he understands I’m here because I’m not wanted anywhere else."
Nice to know where everyone stands, isn't it? :P

"We’re still taught to watch ourselves and our drinks."
Oh yeah.

"…and perhaps occasionally “Little Red” until the summer is over and Grandmama finds a new protégé."
I kind of want to laugh but I'm appalled at the same time.

Great modern fairytale...I think you should write more of them! Definitely, definitely. :D

Nice. Very creative, Miss Neon. You've got a great way with first-person narrative. Bravo! More?

Golly! I love it. Fanstatic. Indeed, the way they should be. And as long as we're on it, what's up with Goldielocks stealing those bears' food?!