   CultureVulture 2008-01-14 . chapter 1Very nicely written. And perfectly in character, might I add.
Fave'd. |
 Bisexualstrisexuals 2007-12-29 . chapter 1 Wow! Absolutely THE best ST fic I've read yet! Wonderful style and very in-character. As one of the other reviewers said, I especially like how the writing becomes a bit more broken and demented as it goes on. Rather like the character himself. Beautifully shocking.
Cheers,
~BiTri~ |
| Heavenmetal 2007-12-11 . chapter 1 Amazing! I love how his rambling gets more segmented and demented the longer he rembles. It starts off so innocent and sweet and ends in beautifully horrible gore.
You're right. It does amke you want to hug and protect him. Poor Toby.
Also, did you know the word count for this is 6 words? creepy... |
 Evita the Akita 2007-10-14 . chapter 1Creepy but cool! I like it! Poor Toby... |
| SimplyElymas 2006-05-07 . chapter 1 (thud)
That was OMG.
GOOD.
You write ST, WHEE! |
| sky vehicle 2006-03-06 . chapter 1 Oh, that was creepy. I like it! It's very Toby. |
| Petrarch's Pillowcases 2006-03-05 . chapter 1 Three times.
When I first saw the revival, this is what stuck with me for days. I used it in my own fic, but you use the number three so well in your last paragraph. This is all entriely in character and a beautiful representation of Toby's thoughts. Great job, hope to see more. |
| CrystalFNFire 2006-03-05 . chapter 1 Sorry... too lazy to log in... but good fic! Yay! My drama teacher was considering Sweeney and Todd for my senior year play... and I was like... "I guess we could do it, but wow... that's a lot of blood and gore."
Anyway, good job in capturing Tobias's point of view! Yay Sweeney and Todd and Human Pies! |
| Hushi 2006-03-05 . chapter 1 Oi, that's horrid! Not your writing, Mizamour; but Lovett's fate. Ah, poor Tobias; I see why you like him. I've always found characters like him very appealing. |
| Nellie Loves You 2006-03-04 . chapter 1 Perhaps the very strongest aspect of this fic is Toby's ramblings. You can tell the trauma has already gotten to him and he can hardly manage to finish a sentence, and he's already peicing together bits of the story that have scattered in his mind. My favorite line was, "...she’s naught but meat now, meat for the monster’s meal." I almost pictured him narrating this to the woman asylum doctor.
This being your first Toddfic, I commend you. (And urge you to keep writing Todd related goodies! I love them.) |
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