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Koyoshiri
2006-10-08 . chapter 1
Luna Satoki no meaning to her name besides luna means moon
Codename: star
pilot
Specialty:computers and explosives
Nationality: American/japanese
Age:17
height:5"7
b-day:October 13
appearance: baggy pants ,anime wristbands,black T-shirt, and brown etnies, long brown hair with red tips green eyes slender slight build
personality:totally insane loves rats and cats hates most vegetables is a totoal nerd but causes troulbe alot loves jokes music and manga.
background:major trouble maker parents killed in the war by assination and every foster parent she's had has had a gruesome death
fav food:burritos
least favorite food:brussil sprouts and ochra
hobbies: blowing things up video games baking movies writing jokes
likes:watching people act like idiots, pulling pranks
dislikes:hypocrits and procrastinators
bandmember
instrument:base guitar
love interest: Wufei
how they met:Luna was strolling along thinking of a new prank when wufei bumped into her and spilt her hot coffee on her and chased him half way down the block and so forth!
The pilots!
Please choose my character! But id o own her im working a story with her in it.
AisuhanaRyuuInari
2006-04-25 . chapter 1
Wow, that's a lot of info. Okay, lets see.
First name: Kisaa
Last name: Haruka
Meaning: I don't know if it has one, so I'll make one up- Kisaa=Water, Haruka=Vixen (I know they don't really mean that, but if you have to have a meaning, I guess those will work . . . )
Code name: Linyaari (if that's too complicated, just use Phoenix)
Pilot: yes
Specialty: spying
Nationality: Hispanic
Age: 17
Height: 5'11"
Birthday: April 27
Appearance: (I'll include her fav outfit, too, I guess) Long auburn hair, golden hazel eyes, long dark lashes, good figure, wears zip down cargo capris (tan), a black halter with a tan mesh over the top, and black clogs, has a tatoo just above her belly button of a five pointed star with a flower in the middle of it and butterflies surrounding it (is that enuff . . . )
Personality: Is a lot of fun when she opens up, but had a hard past, so doesn't talk that much. Is totally intersted in guys, but keeps it hidden. Kicks anyone's ** who gets on her bad side, and has no qualms with killing. Loves to "borrow" certain items that catch her eye. (need more info, just tell me)
Background: Okay, there might be a little bit of tragedy, but it's not big. In fact, it's very common. She went from foster home to foster home cuz she fought w/ everyone. Then she ran away from the last foster home. See, simple.
Favorite food: tacos
Least favorite food: chinese
Hobbies: reading, hacking, spying (of course), stealing, sneeking around just for the fun of it, torturing whoever she feels like needs it, singing and practicing her guitar
Likes: same as hobbies
Dislikes: goody-goody-two-shoes, brown-nosers, losing
Band member: yes
Band position: Lead guitar and/or back-up singer (whatever, doesn't matter to me. But if we can only have one, lead guitar)
Love interest: TROWA!
How we met: Um . . . practicing outside her house (or with Kunai . . . whatever works for you).

Does that work? If you need more info, you know how to find me! (^^) Keep it up, and update soon!
OZ or pilots: pilots
Black-Angel-001
2006-03-19 . chapter 1
Glad to see this chapter up! I'm really, really hoping to see Toni and Kuari meeting the guys (formally) and all reactions.
Rikku Shinra
2006-03-08 . chapter 1
Like it...wait no. I love it! Original Opening, booty kicking, love it. Great start to this story, i hope to read more.

Seeing the little note at the bottom about sending in to have our ( the readers) OC's put it, i couldnt help myself.So, I shall send mine in, wouldn't mind having my character in your story. Its going threw e-mail. So, keep up the good work.

~Rikku
Silver Tsukino
2006-03-08 . chapter 1
wow a good chapter, although its not your best work. Anyway the character form.

Charcter form

First name: Amaya
Last name: Tsuki

Meaning: Amaya "Night Rain", Tsuki "Moon" (Moon Night Rain)

Code name: Night

pilot or no: yes

Specialty: (Mechanic, computers, explosives, spying, assasination, guns, -medic and martial arts and swords are taken-) computers (and spying)

Nationality: japanese-american

age: (16 or older) 16

Hieght: 5'0

birthday: Novemeber 25

appearence: (beauty counts!) kind of short, usual wears black hip-huggers that flare out below her knees. (sorta like bloom's from winx club w/o designs) usually wears a shirt with a smart comment on it.
[Ex: "In fact the world DOES revolve around me"] wavy dirty brown that looks black hair also has a natural red tint, that is usually in a ponytail, bun or hanging out with or without curls.

personality (no mary sue's): funny, trustworthy and easily hurt, also hides feelings a lot. Amaya is known to be crazy...and when she isn't on her laptop expect her to be asleep, showering or goofing off with heer friends. She's known to be slightly evil, crazy and wierd because of her anime obession and the lenghts she'll go to have it.

background: Amaya lives with her mom and little brother. Amaya stumbled on the plans for the gundams and that's how she got involved. Her computer skills make her a great player to keep around. Amaya's father is what she considers to be a traitor...he works for Oz. Something none of her family has gotten over completely. Amaya lives on L3 but usually travels whenever she can. Her mom often gets worried and can be very odd when it comes to Amaya and boys. and by odd I mean her mom questions him, the creaks all sorts of mean jokes on him.

favorite food: watermelon

least favorite food: celery

hobbies: playing NFL Football, Grand Theft Auto and sonic games. Also playing on my laptop

likes: laptops, volience, weapons, gothic-rock, punk rock, pop, and r&b music, ANIME, MANGAS. the colors blue (any dark shade from royal up), black and silver. also has a thing for sometimes acting like a tomboy, and being by herself to reflect on her life. Favorite subjects in school: science, math and computer lab, [also dismissal!]

dislikes: pink, acting like a square [normal] usually sticks outs in a crowd. talking in front of a big crowd of people. Fake people . . . especially those she considers friends. [that includes goosip]
Least Favorite: Social Science, Physical Education [sometimes], art and Spanish.

Band member or not: yes

band position: (lead singer and keyboard are taken) guitar

Love interest: (Duo and Heero are already taken) Trowa

How you and your love interest met: While Amaya was walking around L3's park she bumped into Trowa who was going to the circus that Amaya took her brother to.

Oz or the pilots: pilots
Serenity Maxwell
2006-03-06 . chapter 1
this has and interesting premis and and interesting idea for the oc. i will defingitly be keeping an eye on this story.

First name: Serenity

Last name:Damion

Meaning:at peace with all (what meaning..name, right?)

Code name:Nightmare

piolt or no:piolt

Specialty: (Mechanic, computers, explosives, spying, assasination, guns, -medic and martial arts and swords are taken-)
stelth/spy and guns
Nationality:American mix

age: (16 or older) 18

Hieght:5 foot 4 inches

birthday:May 18

appearence (beauty counts!)
long dark, almost black, brown hair to the waist tied into a lose ponytail at the base of the neck. bangs to mid face leaving a bit of mistery to it. china doll face and complection but eyes that are deep purple blue with flecks of green, gray, and brown around the puple that hold the knowlege byond expected by others. lithe form, but not stick figured. near perfect curves with a chest that fits the body, not overly so. prefers to wear semi tight clothes in blacks, blues, and whites. occationally in reds and greens as well.

personality (no mary sue's)
mostly happy, a bit depresive at times. trys to keep others happy and solve all problems. though it is not cake at all. sympathetic, but not to know it all seeming. likes to listen, but will be a chater box when feels like it. enjoys math, science, and the arts. like music, singing and drawing.

background (no tragedy here and you are not realted to any of the gundam guys or the two main female characters)
comes from a devorced and broken home. no siblings to speak of and never speaks to any of her fathers (step or bio) only person concidered family now is an uncle james and her mother Katie. Went out on her own at 17 and is doing fairly well with no family help.

favorite food: Double fudge chocolate icecream

least favorite food:asparagus

hobbies:drawing, singing, sewing, writing, marksmenship, and paintball

likes (don't just put like reading or trianing or something put down other things too)
math and science, fasinated by gun and how quiet she can be to sneek up on her friends, warm rainy days, working out in the gym or at home, watching anime, reading manga and old books, making people smile, and karate.

dislikes (don't just put bullies or water or hieghts add more)
people who lie, people who hit below the belt in verbal arguments, being caught, being ice cold ( though it will be tolerated), unresponcive people who just sit there for more than half the conversation.

Band member or not: member

band position: (lead singer and keyboard are taken)
bass guitar

Love interest: (Duo and Heero are already taken)
Quatre

How you and your love interest met:
Conferance function few years back, talked a bit and have not been able to stop thinking about since

Oz or the piolots: (for what?) if it is good, i favor the piolots. if it is who should die, OZ!
kidishcaresh
2006-03-05 . chapter 1
Sure i'll fill out the form! I'd love to have my OC in a story of yours!!

charcter form

First name: Yuriko

Last name: Trax

Meaning: i'm not sure, but i think yuriko means either Unique or one who cares.

Code name: Morningstar

piolt or no: pilot

Specialty: hacking, cracking codes and bypassing security systems, spy, uses a wide variaty of weapons; mostly small weapons that she can hide on her person like knives, shurikens or small guns.

Nationality: Half Asian, half American

age: 18

Hieght: 156 cm

birthday: december 9th

appearence: Long dark-ruby colored hair that reaches mid-back, midnight blue eyes. Light tan, Nice body; not too curvy not to muscular and not fat OR skinny; and long legs. She usually wears dark blue, dark red, dark green or black colored clothes; other colors are okay too, but NO PINK!! Mostly tanktops and skaterpants with sneakers. Skirts and dresses only if need be.

personality: She has a calm and collected personality and tends to keep to herself. She's not a spotlight person, but enjoys simple conversation. She tends to remind her friends of things they might forget.Trust is important to her. Once you earn her trust you'll find a truthfull, loyal and sometimes a little protective friend in her.
Around THAT time of the month her emotions go haywire and she swings from one emotion to the next. When she's stressed she drives to the nearest beach to watch the waves crashing onto the shore or the rocks (if they are there).

background: Mother is owner of a company and often away and Father is unknown. She traveled a lot as a kid because of her moms work.

favorite food: Chocolate! (she's often found with a jar of chocolate and a spoon when she's sad or stressed and there's no sea nearby.)

least favorite food: fish.

hobbies: Writing stories and poems, drawing, watching the waves at the beach, hacking and cooking (when bored)

dislikes: dogs and crowds

Band member or not: yes please!

band position: saxophone or violin.

Love interest: Wufei Chang!

How you and your love interest met: At the beach watching the waves. He was there one day and they started talking while watching the ocean and met each other from time to time at the beach; while they stayed in the same town or village.

Oz or the piolots: you choose. I'd like her to be on the pilots' side.

Good luck and let me know if you're gonna use her!!

KIDA AKA Kim
CrazygirlHaley5555
2006-03-05 . chapter 1
Good Gundam Wing Story ^^
But I have a question what's with that name thingie at the bottem?Just a little curious :P
~Sam~
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