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| Klaske 2007-02-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseAh, and what happened next? Interesting way of writing here. But Lady getting married to someone she doesn't even love? Something is not right... >.> |
| Alexander - Godslayer 2006-03-26 ch 1,  | abuseHi, Vero! Since you send me that PM, I decided to check on your profile, and so I found some interesting fics of yours ^^ This one, personally, has been very strong for me. Lady is somehow in-character, except for the point I hardly believe that she would do it with a demon. The feelings are really lovely. And the ending really surprised me. Now I want to see next chapter ;) |
| Hester 2006-03-13 ch 1, anon. | abuse^_^wow this is so believable and beautiful. Props to you for such a nicely written piece. Lady is so cool. |
| aoi senshi 2006-03-06 ch 1, | abuseaww man! why did ya stop there! :p This was starting to get good! Continue! unless it's a oneshot...no...noo!! |
| Bustahead 2006-03-06 ch 1, | abuseI swear I have read this before somewhere, but even so it is no less poignant or effective as it was when I read it first. |
| Vylet Lust 2006-03-06 ch 1, | abuseAw...this fanfic is so cute. I really like the ideas you put together in this. Great job! Keep it up and update very soon. LoL! ~p.k. |
| The Tyrant Hamster 2006-03-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseAww, that was so sweet :), really, just so tender and beautiful, There was a sort of sadness to it, but it was only really a backdrop, the real heart of it was Lady, her love, and her child, that along with some flashbacks to the game just created such a wonderfully warm yet sober feel, not perfect or fluffy, but utterly, brilliantly moving, a really awesome piece of writing in many ways ^^. |
| onigiri_girl 2006-03-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseO__O What? You can't just leave off at a cliffhanger like that?! Wah! *starts to flail arms* I lurv it! Don't stop! Ahh! *runs around room* >__ |
| Kato Shingetsu 2006-03-05 ch 1, | abuseGood story! |
| Lori-chan 2006-03-04 ch 1, anon. | abuse(watery eyes) Omg! I love it.. It's SO SAD and sweet, and and and it's so angstyful.. I |
| Laryna6 2006-03-04 ch 1, | abuseI'm adding this to the female character C2, since it's so Lady-centric. The ending is suspense: you don't know if it's going to be a demon to kill her and the baby or Dante. You know what might be cool? To write two endings, one for each of them. Really short ones, then you'd have romance and tragedy. I like your Lady, as always. |
| >> 2006-03-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseAdorable, really. :3 I especially like how you ended it, what with the questioning of who it actually was outside. Nice job. :) |
| Splendid Shadows 2006-03-04 ch 1, | abuseSquee! Totally loved it! The more DxL, the better baby! And the baby sounds so adorable. :D Faved and please DO continue if more inspiration hits ya! |