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| Black Fang 02 2008-03-01 ch 4,  | abuseHey wayofthepen, Whatever happened to the rest of this story? It's good but you just stopped so suddenly. There was no warning. I mean, come on this was a fun story why did you just go up and leave it? Just Wondering BF02 |
| Black Fang 02 2008-01-06 ch 5, | abuseWhere's the rest? Please write more because I need you to. |
| WillTheWatcher 2006-07-26 ch 5, | abuseDude this is so cool. The way yoou show Seras and Yomikos evolving relationship is really good. I especially like chapter five it was nice. :) |
| r0nnie 2006-06-24 ch 5, anon. | abuseI love the way you did Seras, she's powerful yet still her lovely herself! Please write more soon! Nice pairing too;) |
| writer-jm 2006-05-31 ch 5, | abuseI really like how you've got various things going on. A lot of development and excitement. An interesting plot with plenty of focus on romantic involvement (my first draw-shoujo-ai) Thanks for all your hard work. I can tell! Sincerely, writer-jm |
| Alphawolf69 2006-05-23 ch 5, | abuseGot to say it makes a change to have Seras with someone other than Alucard. Love the acceptence of Seras' vampiric qualities by Yumiko (and Seras herself), it was cool seeing Yumie trying to fool Seras as well. Hope you update soon. |
| deymian 2006-05-22 ch 5, anon. | abusehell this is one good story u got... keep up the good work... i favor the last part tho ;D.. |
| Chinese Dragon Keeper 2006-05-21 ch 5, | abuseAwesome fic! Very sexiful, and you should update. Keep up the good work, yah? ^^ |
| lurk-a-lot 2006-05-21 ch 5, | abuseYay, an update! Very nice! A cool & action packed chapter. Loved the 'fan mail' bit. *lol* Update soon please. Cheers. ^_^ |
| Zero-Vision 2006-05-20 ch 5, | abusewoah... she can kick ** can't she. ^_^ |
| MeatwaD9021 2006-05-20 ch 5, anon. | abuseSweet! I hope you update soon! I really like this story, the action was badass! |
| Zero-Vision 2006-04-09 ch 4, | abuseaw ^-^ so cute. |
| writer-jm 2006-03-30 ch 4, | abuseI'm a fan of the anime, so I'm new to Yumiko. That's cool, because I'm always interested in learning about new characters. It's fun that way. Yumiko's got a pretty crappy life and past. At least Seras might have had some nice experiences as a kid. Of course, I imagine working for Integra and Alucard could be very stressful. I'm a big Integra/Seras fan, but I enjoy all shoujo-ai, as long as it's good. Keep up the good work! I just wish I could get some ideas for this series. Sincerely, writer-jm |
| MeatwaD9021 2006-03-21 ch 4, | abuseThis is a good story! I started to read this one first then I found out that there were two other ones first. So I read all of them all the way to this one, and I say UPDATE SOON! You got me hooked on it, I want to know what happens next. |
| lurk-a-lot 2006-03-19 ch 4, | abuseYour characterisations are tugging at my heart strings. Poor Yumiko. Poor Seras. ;_; Another good chapter, please keep them coming. On another note, I think you're getting Seras & Yumiko mixed up in some of the paragraphs; "Seras face crinkled in confusion at the serious look on Seras’ face" is one example & there were a couple more like that in chapter 3 too (I just noticed when I re-read the previous chapter). Anyway, just minor errors. |