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| Ruto Kuntai 2008-01-07 ch 1, | abuseNow this is a nice Christmas fanfiction, I enjoy the fact that this story is more romantic than other stories. Thank you for the great work. Ruto Kuntai |
| ryoumi yatsu 2007-07-03 ch 1, | abusenaisu asuka ken shinji hanashi |
| Miss Silk 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abuseI loved the OOCness!! This is just the type of story I need to read before going to bed! Great job on the details. I'll be reading more from you ^_~ ( |
| Michael 2007-01-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was a very good story, if not a little OOC. But not too much, Asuka was very good in this story, as much of the OOCness comes from Shinji. |
| theWanderingANBU 2006-07-02 ch 1, | abuseThis was a great story even if the characters were kinda OC but dang! 4 years? that's crazy! Good story though, liked it! |
| that one guy 2006-03-23 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was kickass |
| francis currier 2006-03-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseCartmen: kickass, Kyle: woah dude, Stan: cool, Kenny: booly shhitt (holy **) |
| Frost-EVA-04 2006-03-06 ch 1, | abuseYou know that this could be made into a full length fanfic. You said that you have other stories. Why not try to mold them to this story and make a longer fic? I hope you take my advice. I would like to see this relationship and fanfic become an awesome piece to read. I hope you take my advice, keep up the good work. |
| Dragoon Galaxy 2006-03-06 ch 1, | abuseSweet |
| shinji the good sharer 2006-03-06 ch 1, | abuse*crawling like a man in the desert* must find dentist... too...many...cavities! lol, seriously though i like it, and i hope to see more sometime. ikari shinji |
| Forever Rahhel 2006-03-06 ch 1, | abuseAww, I love this Waffy Romances. They R kinda occ, but that's totally normal after two years. |
| General Sai 2006-03-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseBadass. That's all that can be said. |
| WebKnight 2006-03-05 ch 1, | abuseOnly thing to say is "AWE!" Yea, figures Shinji would wait that long. |
| sheoflittleimportance 2006-03-05 ch 1, | abuseaw thats so sweet i love it @) |
| Draknal 2006-03-05 ch 1, | abuseSo it was OOC, who cares? This was a very good story. It wasn't just a load of WAFFy crap. The pairing was good, (my favorite) and I thought that the description you used was quite vivid. I really am glad to have read this, and I hope you produce other works so I may read them. Congrats, you have just made my favorites list as an author. |