Tender. :D

Aw. that was cute. you shoul continue.

Very nice!! please make a second chapter!!

that was great
i really enjoyed it

aww very cute. a few grammatical mistakes, however who doesn't have those? great work.

this is so cute!

SOMEBODY likes Mariska Hargitay..:Grin: Don't worry, I'll letcha in on a secret...(Me too)!

Hilarious! I love it!

LOVED IT UPDATE SOON

Aww I loved it. I love how you showed them bickering at each other.

That was pretty cute, though it seemed like maybe their insults were just a bit too rough. And I didn't think they had such thick accents, but it was a good story idea. And I liked her name choice better, but his did have history and all...

That was very humerous and good.

i liked it. I haven't watched this movie in forever though! I should watch it tonight! O

Really cute!

awee that was really cute! I injoyed reading that. I was thinking, maybe you could write another chapter with Melanies second child and Jake arguing about how he dosn't remember agreeing to let Mel pick the next name! great chapter!