Just by hearing the next chapter name, I'm sure this "someone" is Tarantulus who somehow survived.

Wonderful story. It truly is a shame that there hasn't been an update in a year. I am known to do the same thing though...write a chapter then wait a year or so before the next one. Hopefully this will be continued.

Howdy, I saw and liked. Not bad. Write more.

I like this story, keep it up!

Not bad, though tell the truth I didn't like all that much of season three, especialy the fusion of the characters Airazor and Tigertron into Tigerhawk.

Your first chapter is ok, though you need to be a bit more descriptive and a bit more careful on punctuation. Other then that I look forward to chapter 2.

Ok, I fixed the word check, and re-up this episode, I've also fixed the scene breaks. What do you think of the idea of the uing Nemesis as a base. Also, should I make it 13 episodes or26?

Sorry bout the spelling. I'm a terrible typist and my spellcheck wasn'[t workinh. I'l do it propery, and re-up this chapter.

can't wait for the next chapter. Love it.

I've been waiting on this fic FOREVER!
CC: You need to work on your spelling a little. It was hard trying to figure out certain words.
Pros: Great original charaters and a great little mind battle with Dinobot there.
Please, please, please continue!

Write more, Please?
Also, Besat Machines was truly stupid and charater-death inducing in my opinion.

Haha, I feel your pain, man. I hated Beast Machines also and what they did with the characters. Heck, I didn't even agree with what they did in Nemesis Part II, which felt more like a rush job than a proper ending.

Your series shows a lot of potential so far and I eagerly look forward to your next chapter.

I like were ur going with this

I love it! More soon?