What can I say, I mean you already know that I love everything you write =D lol
This was really cute, I loved it =)

Annie

phenominal!! i felt like crying tears of joy at the end. great job!!

omg! that was so good! i luved it!

I loved that! That was a very good and different perspective of post-season four. I really bad hate what's happened on the show. I think some writers need to be punished. The show is half ruined for me now. TM is the reason I started watching it in the first place. Oh well...anyways, please keep the past seasons alive with your writing. You have to know you're on of my favorite writers and I REALLY love your season two fics! I haven't had time to read much lately with school but on spring break I'm getting it caught up! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!

Well, you know I loved this. Hot as hell, yet totally emotional and intimate. Very believeable. You are really the best writer on this site, hands down.

And oh my god, you are killing those of us waiting (im)patiently for You and Me updates...

At any rate, I always enjoy everything you write!

This story is absolutely pulchritudinous, which is just a thesaurus-aided way of saying beautiful, like everyone else said. :)

beautifully written , i loved this ,so much emotion from both of them . i love reading these stories of yours, so good at writting them . i love the you and me story another of my faves , well done keep writting :)

This story was really sweet. I love how you just perfectly captured both characters' feelings...especially when Michelle started crying, I could just *feel* her tension and relief and all those emotions. You nailed it ;)

What can I say... this was simply perfect. I'm hoping to hear more stories by you soon, again :)

beautiful. your writing is so clear, dreamy and precice. i loved this whole story, everything flowed perfectly and it was the perfect tone and actions,
overall, this was a perfect post-s4 story

nice work!

This is wonderful! You described so well so many emotions, after the separation and the long day. I loved the last part: "It’s as if everything between us was put on hold the second you got taken away, and it’s just starting up again now...“This past year wasn’t us.” he finished, understanding what she meant."
Keep writing!

Wow, that was wonderful. I think you captured the emotions of the day beautifully - their undeniable passion and need for each other along with acknowledging the pain and guilt. You are a great writer - please keep writing.

for me, this is your best story yet. i think the progress you've made since you started writing is remarkable:'winding down' and 'just breathe' are pretty much about the same thing, which makes the progress even more visible. i liked 'winding down'... i LOVED 'just breathe'... :) keep up the good work!

That was just too beautiful for words! Simply perfect, like all your stories! Write more please!

:)

this left me totally speechless - and hot, i must admit :D
very good work, so warm, so fuzzy, so hot, so full of love and full of emotion. I absolutely adored it. write more of this NOW :D