Nicely done.

I just wanted to say that i read your story and it was great.

Good story!

A bit funny, and xander centered which is not my favorite, but it is also a tale of everyone (duh!) so it was not too bothersome :p

Um, Aw (she says as she wipes tears from eyes before anyone notices hopefully)

keep penning,

Marns

pobody's Nerfect

So very well done!

That was a really truly awesome story! :) It was fun trying to figure out where eachcharacter fit in to the real story

Wonderful! The best "fairy tale" of it's type i've read since "Kitty's Fairy Tale" way back in Uncanny X-men...wanns say 136 (but I'm sure I'm wrong there) I can so see Xander doing this.

Congratulations! This just made my Favorite Stories list.

So are Beckah and Rupert Dawn's kids, or is that just left to the reader's imagination?

The only thing I wasn't too fond of was Dawn being referred to as an inanimate object for the whole story. But great overall!