I like it! I could feel the wind blowing and all that other fun weatherstuff. I think you characterized them quite well. I will hug them and squeeze them and name them...Squall and Zell, because George sounds funny.

COOKIE!

Really wonderful ^^ I enjoyed reading this! Continue to write like this in future, in fact, just continue to write! ^^

Hehe, I loved it!! You should really write more ff yaoi!! I'd for sure read it.

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*glomps*
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Not bad. Some nice description in there, however, you did repeat yourself a couple of times. Didn't notice any spelling mistakes though, so well done.