I think it's Nuriko. ^_^

I think the narrator is Nuriko. Either Nuriko or Hotohori, cuz it's not in Tasuki's ar Chichiri's voice.

Great story! We get to choose! Yay! Wait how do i choose. Lines up Tasuki nuriko hothori tamahome against the wall. Hm. My mother told me to choose the best one and you are not it. My mother told me to choose the best one and you are not it. My mother told me...

^^ It sounds like something that Hotohori would think, but I was thinking more of Tasuki while reading it. The thoughts were really sweet and it sounded like whoever was the one speaking really cared for Miaka.

This was a treat to read. ^_^ Your prose has a very emotive and lyrical quality to it, and your descriptions painted a very clear picture in my mind as to what the narrator was seeing.

Hmm...as to whose pov it is, my guess would be Nuriko? Given the reference to a 'perfect world', and that he was the one to bring blankets to Tama and Miaka in Hokkan, that's who I'd surmise it would be. ^__^

Keep writing!

Every good wish,
KittyLynne

It has to be Hotohori!

Wow! Very well written, and it was beautiful. Well done. *goes to read profile to see if you have written any thing else*