This was VERY good XD

Good Job...!

holy crap that was awesome!

I really enjoyed this story, the last scene just seemed so desperate, I loved it.

*eats her cake while reading again*

T3T I

Aw, how kawaii. I liked it alot.

Thank you for the chocolate cake. Gorgeous fic!

that was so cute ^_^ I just loved it. You so need to make a second chappie or a sequel in Sasuke's POV.
BTW thanks for the cake *m* cake

thank you for the cake and the awesome story!

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I really liked this. Very well written and cute. Great job.

Ohh I like this one-shot, love your Naruto POV, nicely done.. there are some run-ons here and there, but the feeling is really nice. good job!

So beautiful and cute. Quite simple actually, but the descriptions brought it to life... Love! :D

Thanks for the cake ;)

Lovely narrative. I enjoyed the way you took the time to delve into Naruto's personality to show what he thought of Sasuke instead of just telling us. The attention to detail ("unconsciously drawing the outlines of how Sasuke’s shirt melted into his neck line or how his raven hair would cover his cheeks, looking like it was nuzzling the pale skin carefully") added to the picture of what Naruto felt for his teammate even if he didn't know it himself.

Looking forward to more fics in the future. And thanks for the chocolate cake. ^_^

You wrote it so wonderfully and captured their personality very well.

Omigoto desu.

*shoves chocolate cake in mouth*

I so need to love you. I am crying. DAMNIT! Ugh. Really good story, I especially liked what you did at the end. That was simply... simple.

Simple is always beautiful.