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sophia666 2008-11-05 . chapter 2
Great story. I love well-written NaruSaku, and this story is wonderful. I love Tsunade, Naruto and Sakura and how they're dealing, or not dealing, with Sasuke's death, their relationship, the mission. and-
"You've got something," he said, reaching out and brushing his hand across her cheek. She forced herself not to react to the soft touch, his callouses scratching lightly across her lips and down over her chin. The moment stretched out and careened in, the world reducing to a pinprick of light that was just the clearing, herself and Naruto's heat on her skin. And then he leaned back, the spell broken, the moment over.

Wonderful writing.
love-warmth-life 2008-10-17 . chapter 5
^_^!!
MiKe2vIcIoUs 2008-10-16 . chapter 5
That was really awesome. Definitely one of my favorite stories, you are very talented.
NarutoRocks21113043 2008-10-11 . chapter 1
One of the first I read and one of my favorites. Serious, well plotted, joyous, and romantic, this fic is one of the greatest of this site. Jon well done!
ComboBreaker 2008-09-24 . chapter 5
I know im about 2 years late but that was amazing.

You're such a great writer. I don't know how else to say it! Fantastic job!
Mei fa-chan 2008-09-21 . chapter 5
That was great! I really enjoyed it, thank you!
killerlikeschocolate 2008-09-06 . chapter 1
You are one hell of a talented writer. I really loved this. Great job! :)
10manday01 2008-09-02 . chapter 3
good job :)
i like it
sillymail 2008-07-06 . chapter 5
"Fitting the Pieces" is a delightful story. You really did a wonderful job. Also, congratulations on finishing a story for the first time. ^__^
spinachwrap 2008-06-27 . chapter 5
That was a cute fic ^_^
spinachwrap 2008-06-27 . chapter 2
"Hope was a beautiful thing, but false hope broke hearts and his had never seemed quite whole to begin with."

Aw :(
shadowphoenix143 2008-06-23 . chapter 5
Awesome little story!
cutecrazyice 2008-06-12 . chapter 5
Oh, I love this. I really, really love this. Simply, sweet and short. I love it! (yes, in case I haven't said that enough...i'm gonna add it to my favorites now!)
Pounamu 2008-06-10 . chapter 5
Wow... that was by far the best Naruto and Sakura pairing I have read. It's unique, flows well, and it so... naturally paced that the realisation for the pair of characters doesn't feel rushed. Very nice. Very original.
Animaman 2008-04-19 . chapter 5
Nice story.
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