I just hope Ash find out whats going on on the next chapter.

Looks like is Ash Ketchum to the rescue, but I gota bad feeling that is a booby trap.

Please continue.

u must finish it! good storie by the way.

please hurry up with the new chapter

Wow! Two great chapters! I love the plot! I wonder how Ash/Sora will get along with each other. Keep up the great work and I'll continue to review for you!

Oh, boy, are we going to see the yellow tank-top Sora, or the schoolgirl Sora? Don't leave me cliffhanging, after a great chapter.

I love the fic

I love your first chapter! Wow!! Wow!! You did all that i advised you to do with it!! I'm LOVIN' It! (MCDonald's Theme) I am so glad that you made the changes! I can tell this will be a great story!! :) I didn't know that you deleted the original if I did I would'vve been reviewed again! Now, I am in a suspenseful mood!

:) Update Soon!!

Creepy and cool begining for starters. It seems you got a formula going. Update soon