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BarnOwl93
2008-03-02 . chapter 1
Hah, oddly enough I've never thought of this pairing. That's pretty cool. ^.^ Jacques is so awesome. XD ... *wrenches him from Aila's grasp* MINE.
Cat, Avatar for the DCG
2007-08-22 . chapter 1
Cute. And an interesting take. Suikoden... you really have to look hard for relationships in GenSui- I know, because it isn't what it's about- but you do tend to look. And delight in little hints, and wonder- what would happen, if... Thanks for telling one 'what if' very well.
Zoorzh
2007-02-08 . chapter 1
That's really cute!! I liked it a lot!
Trinity
2006-12-25 . chapter 1
That was... very adorable. *giddy* I know I have no right to say anything since I haven't played the game nor even know anything at all about it, really, but I thought that this was supremely adorable and I liked it very much. Thank you for a good read!
Chaoslace
2006-10-25 . chapter 1
Hey, that was really very sweet! Definitely deserves more than four reviews...

Definitely a good pairing, but what I really liked was how you set the scene. And the easy back-and-forth dialogue was perfect, and hard to find in fanfic these days. Well done in all respects.
Ariel Lenore
2006-10-23 . chapter 1
This is such a sweet story. you handeled it very delicately. AS the reader I can vivedly see the characters doing exactly what they are supposed to be doing, without constraint on the writer's part. You made this story seem effortless, which in reallity, could be a real chalange. This was a pleasure to read, and re-read.
Vash's Girl
2006-07-16 . chapter 1
Ah! This made me really happy. I've been replaying the game the past week or so, and I remembered my love for this pairing, since it was so obvious in the game. But at the same time, it's sort of subtle, and you have to read into it, so it's nice.

:) And just when I'm looking for something good to read, this pops up!

It was wonderful, seriously. I found myself at a loss of how to write it, so I wasn't going to, because I wasn't sure how they would interact, but you answered my question perfectly. Aila's really funny, and I liked how you brought out her bold, no-beating-around-the-bush personality here, and how Jacques was so like himself. He always makes me laugh, and this didn't stop me, either.

Flowed really nice, and my favorite bits were Aila's "Um, why?", Jacque's stubble, and when she looked up to find him close. Just... neat structure. Easy to get lost in.

Simple and sweet, and I loved it.
PhoenixSong4232
2006-03-24 . chapter 1
Hey that was so sweet. I think those two are cute together! Awesome job!
SSBFreak
2006-03-06 . chapter 1
Through a sea of endless romance fics about Hugo/Chris, Borus/Chris and Percival/Chris, shines forth a fic about the underused pairing of Jacques/Aila!

I'm a sucker for romance fics (as long as the pairing's straight), but my favourite are the ones that aren't given as much attention as some of the others (Jacques/Aila, Thomas/Cecile, etc). I love the fic mainly for that reason. ^_^

I really like the story!
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