Great!

why forsythia? wouldn't artemis notice the smell?

*ponders* yes, i do believe that i read way too much morbid stuff... *shrugs* ah well, nothing for that.

good fic, by the way. it does seem like something that artemis would do if his parents died that way IF myles and beckett were never born, of course.

adieu,
brittney

T-That was horrible...!
In a good way.
Oh my god, this was so amazing. I was holding my breath til the end and didn't realize it.
I loved this, you truly are on of my favorite Artemis Fowl writers.
Excellent, fantastic, and phenomenal job!

Whoa.

'fic with truely!evil!Artemis, doing truely!evil!deeds. No cutting corners or making everything alright in the end.'

I think you nailed this challenge down. *Shudder*

This was truly one of the greatest short stories I have ever read. The prose was as beautiful as it was tragic, and the characters were perfect. I genuinely fear that some day, the world may actually contain such a one as your presentation of Artemis, who genuinely makes me think of Lucifer's fall from grace.

(cries) Oh, that was so sad... and Artemis is so evil... I can see why you enjoyed writing it! OMG, that was well written! I loved it! You have to have fics that don't have "Happily Ever After" once in awhile, you know? And !evil!Artemis is very well-characterized!

Thank you for writing!

Wow...so powerful...I generally hate these type of angsty fics, but I must say that this truly is a work of art. Artemis's character is PERFECT, as well as Holly's and Butler. I'm sure you won the challenge in Crim.

OK a very good angst but how many times in the book does it mention Artemis doesn't like murder? Up until the point were he killed Holly I could almost see where you were coming from.

To be frank, I can't belive how terrible you made Artemis. He's not that evil and would NEVER have murdered Holly in the real books, not even in the grief and rage of his parents death. No offence, but that story is absolutly horrible! Artemis ISN'T like that.

Whoa. Artemis is indeed evil. This is amazing! I love this!

I wouldn't say I would have enjoyed writing a piece like this. It would have made me extremely sad. :( Well written though.

WOW! That was so...evil. I don't know what to say but I'm quite sure 'most' Artemis fans don't think he would ever kill Holly like this.

A truely amazing piece.

/:/Brizo/:/

you are a very, very violent and evil person. that's not very nice. this idn't an insult just an observation. well written though

Wow, that was an incredibly powerful fic. I was really impressed on how you pressed on with Artemis' cruelty to the very end. I was just wonder if you could explain the last line Butler said about Juliet or something like that.

You're a really good author. This fic shows how Artemis could turn out. I also liked that poem/song thing in the beginning.Yeah.