gr8 story, it had just the right amount elements for good story:) i loved the endin im a sucker 4 a happy endin:) I cnt wait to read ur other stories. Keep up the good work! xx

awesome...

their love save each other... so cute

WOW that was...WOW!

:)

ashley

This story rules. I love Van nand Hitomi. Though Van reminds me too much of a certain perfect soldier. One would almost think they're brothers. Long Live Van and Hitomi Fanel, King and Queen of Faneilia.

AAh...fluffy sweetness. I love it. I have a soft spot for Van and Hitomi, you know, and this was a very kawaii story. Nice work.

That is cute write more stuff this was great.

Wow! your very creative and good at writing! if i had come up with this idea i would of turned it corny! you are a very good writter. -

Awwww... Sweet. But kinda sappy too.

Love! Need sequel!

The mushy ones are the best! Oh I really loved it and the hitting game too! Keep writing!

awwwwwwww! _ very sweet at the end and happy, maybe continue?

cool i love it!

SO SWEET!

Bravo! Great great great! Love it!

AWWWWWW... i liked the ficcie! it's well written and the idea was soo KAWAII! Uhh, for CC (constructive criticism... punctuation is important in writing, you know. BUT WHO CARES! I LOVE DA FIC! KEEP YOU UP! although van falling ill is kind of usual already... i love the way you put things. Hitomi being the queen is like, uhh- what will she look like if she wore this gown thingy? hehehehehe... me and my ideas. Maybe she'll wear what she wore in that Esca OST #3- in the CD cover. that is soo kawaii. *notice something?* I mean, this review is getting to be like an email. BUT THEN, WRITE MORE! *_* (p.s.: thanks for reviewing my story... yours was great too!) Ja ne!