 FallingSilver 2006-07-29 . chapter 1This is such a late review, but... I'm trying to catch up with all your wonderful fics! -is determined-
As for this one... Oh, gosh. It's just so SAD. Actually, I've never read an angsty InuKai fic before, so it was also really different from anything I've ever read. And as much as I hate anything to happen to our characters except sunshine and happiness, I have to say, I really like the idea you used! The realism of Inui's situation was very interesting. It's also nice that it was a oneshot, because it conveyed a lot of emotion in a short time, which is very good for angst fics, I think. Anyway, nice job! -scurries off to read more- |
 kawaii-kirei 2006-03-11 . chapter 1The ending was rather blunt, but omg, that hit me the most. *cries* uber angsty fic. ._. Great job! ^^ Honestly, I love the ending! Aww, no happy ending? ^^ |