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| Blueflamewolf 2007-05-01 ch 1, | abuseRachel? Hi, it's me. Yes, I'm here, and, well... Idk. I haven't heard from you in a long while. I hope you are ok. I didn't get you in trouble, did I, last summer? I hope I didn't. I have heard many things about you, from above, and below. I prey you are still with us. Charles hasn't hurt you, has he? His last name, or so I am told is Marvella. Erik said that that was his last name. Strangly he was the one to give me the idea for that name for my fic. I thought it was a good idea, but now I see he was telling me something hidden. But I do have news. Such news. But I won't tell you unless you respond, because I want to know you are ok. I hope you are well, and not sick, or hurt. I'd never forgive myself if I caused something like that to one of my dearest friends! Because of something that has happened, I've had my thoughts on all of my friends, wondering about them. And it just doesn't make sense about what I have done. What I did just a day ago. I guess you could say that love took hold of me, and make me see clearly for the first time. But now... Idk... Please, respond back, my friend. ~Desirae~ |
| Doctor Madwoman 2006-07-07 ch 23, | abuseA good ending! Yay, you'll be updating teaching Erik! (Dances insanely) I have now come to love PotO...I balme you and Novitas...anyways, I like Jadis sort of comparing Kirra to Edmund...it gives you the idea that she was holding back thoughts of her for a while. I shall miss this story...but at least I can read it over and over and over... (Jadis and Madam Giry smack me) Ouch...you get the idea. Much digital fudge and hugging and murder attempts, Doc/Jadis/Madam Giry |
| novitas 2006-07-06 ch 23, | abuseYour writing is fabulous. I grew vaguely teary whilst reading your end-of-the-story speech (which is my dramatic self coming through) and I look forward to your sequel! |
| DarkLightningEnvy 2006-07-06 ch 23, | abuse-claps- Very good! Can't wait for the sequel! Poor Jadis and the thinking of Kirra. -huggles your Jadis- Be happy! Good job on the fic! Very impressive! -Envy ~Jess |
| novitas 2006-06-19 ch 22, | abuseLovely, as always, although Eleanor's death seemed a bit rushed. More please. |
| TigerCat 2006-06-19 ch 21, | abuseBas kicked tail! You wrote her very well. The other cameos were fun too. This was an awesome chapter, despite the fall of Narnia. Can't wait for more! |
| DarkLightningEnvy 2006-06-19 ch 22, | abuse-claps again- Eventful. And very sad. Poor Jadis. Having to kill the woman she had come to see as a daughter. -sniff- -Envy ~Jess |
| DarkLightningEnvy 2006-06-19 ch 21, | abuse-claps- Very good! I liked :) Heh, my character is all attitudish.. Very interesting battle. Keep up the good work! -Envy ~Jess |
| Doctor Madwoman 2006-06-18 ch 21, | abuseYOU LIVE! Yay, Tara's bossy AND she died in battle! ROCK ON!! I look forward to the next chappie when Jadis most likely has to kill Ella. Can anybody say angst??! Update soon. ~Doc |
| jasonc65 2006-06-16 ch 21, | abuseA were-tiger? Never heard of tigranthropy, lol! |
| novitas 2006-06-16 ch 21, | abuseKSORINTHA. omg. You portrayed her JUST as I imagined! Awesome chapter! |
| DarkLightningEnvy 2006-06-12 ch 20, | abuseMeep! Oh my gosh! Your not updating for a while!? Egh! Oh well. Gotta do what you gotta do. HURRY BACK! -Jess ~Envy |
| DarkLightningEnvy 2006-06-02 ch 19, | abuseVery good, as usual. Can't wait to see the rest of the battle. Keep on updating! -Envy ~Jess |
| Doctor Madwoman 2006-05-27 ch 19, | abuseUpdated! Yayness! I...I know back up plans...I'M SO HONORED! (Starts sobbing uncontrollably into Jadis' skirt) Jadis:Get it off! Ella: Hee hee... I look forward to the battle! I have a feeling everyone we hold dear in this story is gonna die. Yay! Ella: But...wouldn't that be BAD? Maybe... Jadis: Don't listen to her, Kirra-I mean- Ella. She is insane. Damn RIGHT I am! Ella: I get the impression that she's proud of it... As always, I enjoyed it and please update. If you don't, I'll make Jadis borrow Elphaba's army of winged monkeys and MAN will you regret it!! ~Doc/Jadis |
| Feles Sibilans 2006-05-27 ch 19, anon. | abuseSo you included me! Now, you should have had Jadis turning people into stone. Surely, she'd do more damage with her wand. |